Nice job. I am really enjoying your stories. Awesome work.

love it

very great story, the most original "designate this" i ever read bravo

a French fan

Great story. I thought you were really in character through out it. It's a shame you don't write Dark Angel anymore; you're good at it. Great job.

great! love it :)

well, it ended on a very good note.

i liked it!

kudos!

yay for it being alec and not ben, and grr for him lying to her!

hehe, loving it so far!

great story

aw omg this story is so amazing! Good job! I actually cried thats how sweet it was!

YES!

I was looking for this story! I started reading it when there was only 5 chapters and then I got out of the DA fandom. I've recently started reading again and was wondering how this story ended. I am happy to see there is definitely more here and now I get to know!

It was a complete accident that I stumbled on this again. A very, very happy one!

interesting AU, although there were bits and pieces I felt were too easy or unbelieveable. but happy endings are always nice. :)

haha, i always imagined Renfro more on Sandeman's side than working with the familiars...otherwise she wouldn't tell max to find sandeman. -shrugs- but it was an interesting possibility.

i love it! you shoud write a an alternate universe piece where max grew up w/ her siblings and alec has to bring them back to manticore... you're writing style would fit it

I finish reading this story at a sitting...I like it!

Loved it!

Awesome chapter and the ending was also really cool and very sweet. Max/Alec finally together, yay and you must write a sequel, plz!