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| phi4858 2006-04-16 ch 3, | abuseWhy did you loose your interest in this plot? It is very interesting. I'd like to read more of this. Perhaps you'll change your mind I hope so. |
| Acetoorion 2005-07-25 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter, I'm glad she's opening up. Well written too, apart from a few comma errors. Hope you update soon! |
| Eyghon 2005-07-24 ch 3, | abuseI'm intrigued, please update soon! |
| irionelissa 2005-07-13 ch 2, | abuseLike the story. It may be goign some where intrestion. Why would Sydney be acting like that? Why did she leave the CIA? Also just a fact it would take I know at least a couple of days to get to New York to LA because when my cosin went on Vaction to La from Houston, Tx it took them i at the least 2 days to get there. Any way i thought i let you know that. |
| Acetoorion 2005-07-10 ch 2, | abuseOh, very good so far, I like your style. I'm definatly intrigued as to what happened to her and I'm looking forward to the rest! |
| Nikira 2005-07-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love this story!! What happen toSydney? Hurry with more! |