I applaude you! I really do. I love Tom Riddle to no end

This is so... Wow. Impressive

I just had to say- oohh, so accurate.

So, it was Dumbledore's fault?

Cool.

pretty good...i liked it

wow... it's good...

Luressa, goddess of water and the stars

Oh I like this a lot

Very good, pretty good with the in charecter thing. Very interesting.

Interesting. First I've read from this POV.

The end was very interesting and I've never read a vignette in the third person before, so it was also interesting in that aspect. I will say, though, that the last line, in my opinion, seemed a bit out of the previous style.

This is so v. v. good.

-fangirls madly-

Wow... nice insight. I've never read anything like that before and absolutely loved it.

Wow, this is a wonderful beginning. I hope this isn't one shot, better be a story, sounds good. Update soon! - MedievalRynn

This was good. Seems fairly realistic and it was enjoyable to read. Real good job on it _