*squeels*
That was so cute! And so well written! And just so plain gorgeous! Amazing story! ^^

Aw... too cute. ^^

yes, another tuti/nagayan fic! and it didn't disappoint--i loved it. great dialogue, vivid description, lots of warm fuzzy closeness between the guys, and a wonderful premise that provided the perfect backdrop for the romance to be found within. and speaking of the romance, it's nicely understated, making for an interesting contrast to your other fic. all in all, i loved it; you give a depth and reality to these people that makes it seem like you DO know them, and you have a real talent for developing the chemistry between them in a way that feels natural and right. great work! may you write many more tenimyu fics, until we tuti/nagayan fangirls have no choice but to forsake sleep and work and do nothing but read your stories. ^_~

Ah, those boys...!

I'm so glad you wrote more about them! This was really lovely; you have a real talent for description (I wish I had the patience to describe things well, but I don't, sadly ^^; ), and certainly, for an unbeta'd fic, this is excellent. Heck, it's good even for a beta'd fic. :P I can SO see Tuti doing and saying everything you have him doing and saying...Nagayan, too, of course, but Tuti especially. Yay, Tuti! And there are so many nice little moments between them. I love it. ^^

Anyway, thanks for this, I'm glad you posted it! Hope you write more!

~NN ^^