Great chapter keep updating

hey!
great story, i just wanted to let you know that the lyrics in the summary are actually from Anna Nalick's song, "Breathe"
Keep up the good work!!

I think this is great! I read The Last Sweet Rose and thought that was great and this is just as good. I found this (and LSR) really moving. Please write more.

you may not be able to see it but i'm sticking my tongue out at you right now!it's so short!!you have to update soon again and make it LONGER!

great plot you got going! update soon i can't wait!!btw i love your other stories too!

this is very interesting, but i'm a little confused. does each paragraph in the story denote a different character's point of view? i like the tone of the story and i'm curious to see where you go with it.