Nice essay. A little short, but to the point. In brief, I can tell that you are an emotional writer. That is good in this story, but in others, it might get irritating.

That was good, I liked it a lot.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

that was kinda cool. inside the wrapped mind of luke. emotions awsome.

i like

awwwwwwwwwww........

Overall, a pretty good job. You seem to be facing the same formatting demon that plagues me (Ha Ha). Only two suggestions, Write more, and the sentence that starts with "Her who kept him..." is gramatically incorrect. It's "She who kept him..." Don't mean to nit pick, overall, it's a solid piece.

Luv the yummy snuggle fics. Very warming!

Great story! Keep writing!

That was great!

I loved it! can we have a Mara POV now? Poor Luke. He and Mara deserve whatever happiness they get. The official, paid writers should cut them some slack.

Wow...that's really good! I'm really impressed...I'm a really big Luke/Mara fan and I think this is one of the best stories about them that I've ever read! Keep up the great work!

That was such a beautiful story! I loved reading it and am now bookmarking it! The concept of the story struck right on the mark, and the writing style was also excellent!! Great job!

Oh...this is really quite good.

Awwwwwww, that was lovely! *sniff*