I love this fanfiction! You did a great job writing this ine! Ya know just a question, does this fic have a sequel of something? Cause it is totally awesome!

This is what should've happened to Otto, if life was fair. Oh, well.

Do a sequel!

Interesting . . .

This particular fic might make me have to try and draw DocOck!! xD
IT was very cute, I'd put off reading it for a couple days because I wasn't sure if I'd like it or not. I shoulda known better, I love Dr. Octopus as a villian (especially since Spiderman 2 came out) and combining him with Doc was a great way to go ^_^.

Wow...this is one of the best stories I've ever read. Are you going to do a sequel?

Nice work! *covers eyes* except for the swearing! EEK... nice work on Doc though! :)

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You'd better do a sequal some time, after they expand the DeLorean a bit. Good story. :D
~ED

Great story ^_^ Can't wait to see what you put out next, or if you do an OckDoc sequel someday :)

Great chapter :) I'm glad the guy didn't turn out to be some kind of bad guy =P

The plot thickens!

the whole shopping saga was so much Fun!
the world has too many people like the lettuce woman, doesn't it?

anyhow, good update!

Great chapter ^_^ S.A. eh? Mysterious :P

cool

I think that this is what SHOULD HAVE happened to poor Doc Ock, don't you? Life is just unfair.
It's a cool story, and a cool idea.
G'bye