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Reviews for: Sins of The Father: Year One
spinningleaves
2009-06-10 . chapter 2
Ahaha! Jokingly imitate the lecture for weeks to come- I lovee it! All of this characters are so positively excellent that it doesn't feel as if any of them are OCs! I hope this hasn't been abandoned entirely because I greatly enjoyed reading it and I feel like you could really bring this characters on quite the journey! Excellent!
AnaNinaSnape
2007-07-10 . chapter 2
Wow!
Estou aguardando ansiosa o próximo cap. E curiosa para saber quem é a mãe de Séraphine.
Parabéns.
I am awaiting anxious the next cap. It is curious to know who is the mother of Séraphine.
Congratulations.
Nina
mimbulus-mimbletonia
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
doesnt seem to have been updated but i'll hope, i really enjoyed this, seraphine is great...whos her mother?
chalicity
2007-03-26 . chapter 1
i really liked these characters! i wish there was more to read of this... it's a great story so far! :)
Hazel Dollenganger
2007-02-28 . chapter 1
Very good. Thanks again. You have very good character development.

Cheers,

Hazel
Adi Phoenix
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
Question for you: is this story taking place after Order of the Phoenix, or some earlier book? I imagine it would be before HBP, since Dumbledore's still there, of course. Just wondering. As for the story... I love it so far! It was a long first chapter, but if each chap is this length, XD, I don't mind! Are you going to update it sometime soon? I'd like to know what happens next. I'm curious to see how this generation will be, especially Tibs Malfoy and Seraphine Snape. Sirius and Carlin seem like mini-marauders to me; will a third be joining them? Or is there already one that I've missed?
Look forward to reading about the havoc of a new year! Update soon,
-Adi Phoenix
SugarDimple
2006-06-16 . chapter 1
humz... i thought tibs was the same age as sirius. then it would be his first year at hogwarts. so how did his younger brother get there too? o.O

anyhow, i really liked your sorting hat song =) it's a lot better than many that i've read.

looking forward to the next update!
Hebi R.
2006-05-01 . chapter 1
More please! I think I going to like Tibs. By the way, who married Severus and Rcao? (And if you name the priest/magistrate/minister/ect, I'll be quite put out)
Gemm
2006-01-08 . chapter 1
I really like it. You seem to have thought a lot about everything in the story so far, and I think that it's wonderful that you did this type of a FanFic. I realize that you haven't updated in about 6 months, but I like this story, so if you could, just wondering, possibly continue?

TTFN TA TA FOR NOW!
Cliona
2005-10-25 . chapter 1
Again, very well done, dear! I don't think your Sorting Hat song was bad at all. I love seeing a sweet'n'sour Snape! I also like the smart and nobel Malfoy; someone's gotta save the family name! I have a feeling that this will be a very interesting story when you get around to updating it.

Smooches,
Cli
kalira
2005-10-15 . chapter 1
I really liked it. It will be interesting to see what happens later. And, just incase you were wondering, the sorting song wasn't all that bad. You did a whole lot better than I did when I tried. There were a few things that could have been changed in the song, just mixing things around for a better flow, but all in all it was good. Do keep writing!
Jocelyn
2005-08-23 . chapter 1
Another beautifully-written tale. Your name wouldn't happen to be Dot, would it?

Not many people outside my family know about my sister calling me Joce-O. ;-)
broadsourcebud
2005-08-08 . chapter 1
What are you talking about? The sorting hat's song was really good! Congrats! I remember you mentioning it, but you never showed it to me... but its awesome. Good job, mate!
Freja Lercke-Falkenborg
2005-08-07 . chapter 1
Why is it that you never really seem to get reviews? This one is not so affronting to the rather Gryffindorish fanfic community? You do have a soft spot for Snape, don't you? Well, he seems nice enough in your stories... I like this story, and I really hope you actually intend to write more of it. The sorting hat's song wasn't that bad, I just had to search a bit to find the rythm, but I did! Keep on, if you have no other reviewers, you'll have me, I promise.
Freja
SilverShiningStar
2005-07-21 . chapter 1
oh! This story is interesting! I can't wait to see the next chapter...

gasp! A malfoy in ravenclaw? unheard of!
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