 Shinobu13 2008-05-30 . chapter 15OH MY GOD! THAT WAS AMAZING! And it was the best surprise when I logged into hotmail, and saw that I had a new chapter alert! MAN THAT WAS GREAT! Please, please write more! And I would give you puppy eyes but I know that it wont work, so I'll give you a virtual COW PLUSHIE! *Gives cow plushie*...^^; |
 Shinobu13 2007-09-19 . chapter 14 O_O...Oh...MY GOD! I think I'm going to CRY! T_T...So...sad...but neh! |
 dragondolphin1990 2007-01-08 . chapter 14I didn't like chapter 13 much because it was too much of repeating yourself. For a second, I thought I had gone to the wrong chapter, or something. (heehee, aren't I cool, I can give constuctive criticism. at least, I hope it's constructive criticism. otherwise, I'll turn into Ritsu and appologize a bunch)
You probably couldn't tell, but I actually do like tragedies. (people think all I care about is comedy and stuff) The ending... I can't be happy that it's over, but I do admit that it's a really really good ending. Really good. Well, it's a bad ending, if I remember that I don't get to be with my Aaya. But looking at it from an outsider's position, it's really good. How many times can I call it really good?
Really good.
...And I don't remember ever threatening you with a spoon... |
 Mayumi Takanashi 2007-01-08 . chapter 14GAH! It's over! You know, you may have made many readers angry with the way you ended it, but those kinds of endings are good from the author's perspective. It allows you to kind of wrap things up and give yourself closure. Props! And I suppose you're safe from the spoons...for now, anyway. 0_0 |
 Mayumi Takanashi 2007-01-08 . chapter 13Hey! Are you saying that I'M short?!? *death glare* |
 Rain Melody 2007-01-07 . chapter 14WAAHH! it's finished!! well.. i guess i'm kinda glad cause know i know how it ends. i love the ending!! very well done!! but i also hate it! aw..i wanted themm all to end up together and happy! but wait, anishi and shigure have a son no? what happened to him? and did mayumi erase the memories of losan and anishi too? it seems like it. please email me back cause i'm kinda confused and i really want to get it straight. you might have explained it before but um..i have bad memory and i have probably forgotten. but please tell me anyway! thanx and keep up the wonderful work with your other stories!! |
 Rain Melody 2006-12-30 . chapter 13aww. but, didn't you write all this before? it seems so familiar... |
 Shinobu13 2006-11-20 . chapter 12Why am I always a bad person! T_T...Sorry Losan! *waves arms frantically* Ehehehehe...T_T |
 Mayumi Takanashi 2006-11-13 . chapter 12Woo hoo! I'm finally caught up! I was a few chapters behind, but I'm all good to go now. And here's my comment:
Awesome.
~Kati a.k.a. Mayumi~ |
 Rain Melody 2006-11-10 . chapter 12o.o i like the ending line very much. ands omg anishi SLAPPED losan!! that's a bit much don't you think? lol. this mitch person sounds VERY interesting...dun dun dun hahaha. and i'm a little confused on the conversation and the past thingie. have mayumi and hatori met before? and how come hatori doesn't seem to remember it but mayumi does? wouldn't mayumi have had her memories erased like she remembers him telling her she had or something...i'm making myself confused. this is why i don't like thinking. everyone always tells me i shoudn't but i don't listen to them and then i get confused like this. i like the story very mush UPDATE plz!! i haven't updated my stories either sorry. no time. but that doesn't mean you can't upsate yours so plz because i really want to know whats going on and who this mitch person is!! |
 dragondolphin1990 2006-10-21 . chapter 12I am reviewing! I got home from the test, petted my doggie (not Shigure! mind out of the guter! besides I have Aaya...) and then I got on And I am reviewing!
Um... I guess now is the part where I'm supposed to constructive criticize you. Um... You need to, um... I dunno. It's good. Write more! *hugs* (P.S. see you in a few hours. yay, clarinets!)
~Losan |
 Rain Melody 2006-08-05 . chapter 11that was funny... Panties!! lol. and everyone will eventually end up in an asylum. eventually. who are mitch and jared? and the american cursed family seems a lot like the japanese one. |
 dragondolphin1990 2006-06-28 . chapter 11That's awesome; I broke Shigure. That's pure genius, right there... too much underwear, I'm blind!
These were hillarious. Yay, Tano and Miko! *glomps the sisters* ...no poof, did I break them, too? *somebody else says "They aren't cursed"* Yay! I saved the cars! *somebody else says "They aren't cars, either"*
... This is probably my most insane review ever. |
 Shinobu13 2006-06-24 . chapter 11EHEHEHEHE! THAT IS SO COOL! *squees* God...I've been squeeing a lot, but tell your sister thank you! ^^ |
 Shinobu 2006-06-03 . chapter 10 YAY! THANK YOU TANOKAI! *GLOMPS* MUST WRITE MORE! PLEASE! *clings to leg* Pretty please?? ITS SO GOOD! |