*clapping* ROFLOL!! this is a great story! I love the addition of the dialog. It was absoultly an interesting and fun tale!

I really had fun reading this- the only suggestion I can make is perhaps lighten the grammer a little bit, but other than that I really liked this- it was a lot of fun, thanks for writing it!

I loved the style, It really worked well and was very creative. My mind is a rather scary place too, so i understand!

Ah, characters constantly interrupting your work...now that's something I can sympathize with.

This story was an wonderfully amusing one, and made for a great quick read. I liked the fluff elements,and Jareth and Sarah seemed wonderfully in character, both in the story itself and the outside dialouge. Excellent job, hope to see more of your work soon.

What a great one shot! It made me laugh, but I'm also a bit curious about this website you mentioned? What "area" in particular?! I've just read 'Your Eyes' and enjoyed it so much I'm going through all your stories and reading and reviewing - you're my new favourite author. HP and Labyrinth, bliss!
P.S. Since this story was posted so long ago I don't know if you'll ever read this review, but it had to be said!

I loved it! It was almost like getting two stories in one. The dialogue made me laugh, and the story made me happy. Yay, good job!

lovely! I love the commentary, it makes the REAL story that much better! And because of al lthe shameless pulgs for your other story, i might just have to go back and read it! =D Mah-velous!

I liked this, it made me laugh. I look forward to reading your more...serious fanfics, ha. Are you going to start posting them soon?

Very very cute and well written. A flash of the original story through the way you wrote the humor, brought back memories of the movie. Well done.

This was very, very, very cute. Though I must warn you, I got a visit from Jareth while I was reading it and he all but begged me to write an answer to it. He was quite insistant, actually. Anyway, I have my own story to work on, so I just said I'd think about it.

Despite what Jareth says, I think it was a lovely story, and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it.

i absolutly loved your story. it's great how Jareth and Sarah always interrupt. the only people who interrupt me are David Bowie, Spike, Oz, and um...
Johnny depp: Me?
Saffron: *smiles widely* ah yes Mr. Depp here.
Johhny Depp: I feel forgotten. *sniffs*
Saffron: Sorry