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| Rae Roberts 2005-10-07 ch 1, | abuseCute. "Big deranged homicidal monkey"--LOL |
| Tan-is-a-fan 2005-08-27 ch 1, | abuseCaught up with these stories again and I still love them with all my heart. They're incredibly well-written, heartfelt and in tune with the 'verse Joss created. These little stories really tend to brighten up my day and I'm looking forward to another update soon :). |
| redick4 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseGreetings! Just stumbled across your stories recently and decided to read 1-16 before reviewing since I was behind from the start. While the thought of a Jayne/River pairing left me skeptical at first, your stories have created a certain logic for the idea. I really enjoyed Today Is and Countdown. Even though, sadly, Firefly was not on long enough for us to get Joss' complete vision for River and her inner thoughts, your version follows a path that makes sense and is fun to read. All the stories have been well written and I look forward to the remainder of the series! |
| Nemi 2005-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseheh...that was sort of cute... in my opinion, a good portraial of the character's personalities. Not a lot of out of character-ness here. Though i'm a little disturbed at the thought of Jaine and River...*shudders*...he'd never do little things for her, i don't think. He thinks she's a bloody lunatic!...and, that being said, i think he might even be a little afraid of her...expecially after she stabbed him. but he also seemed very impressed by her picking up on badger's accent so quickly in the "Shindig" episode. ok, this turned into an anlysation of jaine's reaction to river, when it was supposed to be a review, but all in all i thought it was a funny and cute little fic...a nice moment between simon and river |
| Rebecca-Pearl 2005-07-16 ch 1, | abuseMONKEY? |
| Neroli 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseLovely! I just caught up on this series again and I must say, I love the way you portray River and Jayne in them but it's really nice to see how well you write Simon and Kaylee too. |
| EreshkigalGirl 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abuseCute. Very funny. But, would Jayne really give her knives? The guns I could see, but the knives...? Anyway, I hope to see more of River and Jayne's thoughts on what's going on. Woot for you being half-way done! Nice feeling, isn't it? |