   Teddy-wabbitz 1/15/11 . chapter 1Good story. |
| Rachel 11/25/01 . chapter 1 OMG what an ending it was totally unexpected but well written and a sucessful twist. Keep on writing your doing a brilliant job i cant wait to read more |
| Anna-mathe 10/30/01 . chapter 1 . . . . whoa - that ending just totally blew my mind. (?) Weird! But a good story! Whee! Someone noticed Ohio! We're not just a stupid state stuck in the middle of nowhere anymore! |
| michelle knight 8/26/01 . chapter 1 how good was that? |
| Loreal 6/6/01 . chapter 1 Fantastic! Please, keep writing! |
| Shelly 4/9/01 . chapter 1 Woah! I wasn't expecting _that_ ending! This was a great story-I look foward to the next one! _ |
| amy 4/8/01 . chapter 1 good story. enjoyed reading something new |
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