That's so sweet! :D
I'm so happy that Revenge lived; I really see Hope shining through. ^_^

Aww... w.w -sniff- That's so sad...
Loved it!

Was a very good chapter! :D I could see that Kai and Revenge are actually meant for each other from the start; either her or one of her friends.
Well done for writing in a boy's POV, which I would think is a very hard thing to do, since you're a girl, and it's also new. You don't really read many stories in a boy's POV, especially Kai. I have to point out that you sometimes go into 3rd person [he instead I].
I love this story! :D It was a bit mushy, but not too much.
Once again, well done! ^_^

En-En-chan
x

wow! i love this story so far! it's all so sad! i hope there is a happy ending.

plz do a sequle i beg of u i'll even help u and send you pieces but plz continue

SORRY (hides behind the sofa) I know I should have read this sooner but I have a very good incuse! Well if not good slightly amusing. And it’s simply that I didn’t want to read it. (shocked gasps) I didn’t want to read it but in a good way, I don’t know how to describe it really. It’s kinda like when you have that one bar of chocolate left so you put of eating it for as long as you can cus you know that when it’s gone you’ll have to wait ages before you get more. Do you understand? Cus now this fic is over I won't get to read anymore of it. (sobs) But this was an amazing ending and you are an truly gifted writer, so please, please, please, keep up the good work kay!? lol see ya

Hello My Names Emma ive Taken 2 nigts up to read your story and i have to give it to you it is a spectacular piece you really got into Kais shoes and this story has to be one of the best ones ive read so far :) keep up the good work hopefully ill fine another one of your masterpieses :D x

(cough...cough) I haven't really read this sorry Mem, I just felt like reviewing ain't that nice...n-e-who I dun wot to say now but...keep up with the writing ur gonna be a great author in the future as well as a phantom killer (cough)...by the way a reminda that YOU beta get a move on with SCIENCE! its 25% of our mark so get a move on...
now that's outta the way i have nothing else to say, i'll just read this l8a see you at school

Steph XoxO (uh oh revealed myself)

I LOVED IT! That was an awesome ending!! lol...I wasn't expecting it to end with Kai talking like it had already happened and he had just been telling a story the whole time...that was really good! ^.^ I really enjoyed the story! BUII!

The End! NIce ending and i loved your story. you are a good writer.

*sniffles* That was so good. Like really really good. I think i liked the last chappy the best. Ahh, so sad it comes to an end! but i still loved it!
-Sanura

No, how could you leave it there! DON'T kill her!

YOU CAN'T BE SERIOS! It's ending already?? GEEZE!! It's an awesome story and I'm SO glad u didn't end it there...*sighs* Update soon please! I Loved It! ^.^

no dont kill her... and a happy ending would be really nice although your the writer...

O.O Holy. Fucking. Shitballs. My eyes are unworthy of such work! Even what reviewers have called my best work seems so mediocre compared to this.

However... I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAIM YOU IF YOU KILL REVENGE!

Please update soon!
-Yurii