LOL Yoda whacked Ani with his gimmer stick... that was PRICELESS!

A better ending than the "real" one, for sure. I would suggest reordering your chapters so that they are in time sequence to prevent confusion. Other than that, a good job!

phantom_jedi

wow...just perfect!

Wow, that is amazing, I can't believe I didn't get to this story sooner!

Wow, you are a truely amazing writer!

Aw such a sweet end ! I love it, it's such a pleasure to read a happy end ! Obi/Ani fics seldom have happy ends, they often finish in tears and death, it's quite depressing. That's why I love your story, you make a very beautiful end, with a lot of hope and projects for the future. Will you put Chewbacca in the sequel too ? He's so funny XD ...Well even if it must be difficult to write down what he says ^^;
Anyway, thank you for your wonderful story, you put me in an awfully joyful mood :p Thanks so much !

FANTASTIC :D what a great story :D the title fits really well, its a beautifull story :D

Brava! Well done. A great story, well written, well thought out. Thank you for your wonderful effort here. :)

Oh, this story just gets better and better! :)

very well written! :)

GRR...98 reviews...

Great Story

Amazing story! I think that an epilogue and a sequel are a great idea...update soon!

Sad, lovely, I liked it... ;)

What this is over ! I'm running out good fiction to read. Since everybody is not finishing thier stories. Well I enjoy this story very much and kinda sad to see it's over. :(

that's so funny that you chose flickerstick to do a songfick about, my dad knows the guitarist (rex) he played in a band much earlier in his career with all my parents friends...too bad the band broke up. Anyways, i love this idea and it's always good to have a little anakin obi-wan drama! keep up the good work!