wah XD i loved the last line! which part of the manga was it?

A couple of continuity problems with the manga, but other than that, very good character study. Thanks!

Wow, a new fic. *cheers* It's been foever since a new story has come out.

Anyway, I love this fic- it's so true. Normally, I would say that Shion got the worse end of the deal back then, but you presented it in a way that managed to change my opinion. Good job!

Finally, another Please Save My Earth fic! There are not enough out there for me!

Poor Rin...you got his character really well, and the things he said suited him. Rin really does have a fetish for manga.

Anyway, good one-shot. I like it.