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La rose_timide
2010-01-03 . chapter 8
Oh my gosh its perfect the end. By the way ho's the mestery voice i hoppe'll be emma.
jo
2006-04-10 . chapter 8
loved it. it made me cry. plz can u get the sequel out soon thx
bohemianbabe
2005-07-31 . chapter 8
it was beautiful! i'D LOVE TO WORK WITH YOU ON THE SEQUEL! I'll work out the detials i didnt have for you when i emailed the idea and then we can see what we want to do. you are really good!
lotta love
martana
melodie568
2005-07-31 . chapter 8
poor lexa she died that is the second story today i have read when someone dies. i read dominion wars it is a great story you should read it. i think your story is excellent i would love to read the sequel, my email is email when the sequel comes out please. i love your story.
JediJen21
2005-07-29 . chapter 8
Lexa...died? At least they were able to say they love one another and Jesse can move on with his life. But what are Adam and Emma's secrets? Does this new mystery woman have any connection to Lexa? I hope you add a sequel!
bohemianbabe
2005-07-28 . chapter 7
ooh, cliff hanger. now the only way i'll let you not put jess and lexa together is if she dies. morbid romantic stuff and all. of course if she dies he wont know what to do with himself...
either he'd ahve to kill himself or someone kill him, or maybe have him a long way down the road with another woman, that could spawn a sequel.

ooh, email me and i can give you some ideas! love ya!
bohemianbabe
bohemianbabe
2005-07-28 . chapter 6
good chapter! i loved it!
JediJen21
2005-07-26 . chapter 7
Heck yeah! Jesse's love will heal our Lexa! LOL! I just don't know if it would be enough to keep her there at Sanctuary especially cause Emma and Adam are back...but keep going! I want to see Jesse's reaction to the group leaving without him! Love this story!
JediFeral
2005-07-24 . chapter 6
I think you are doing great. If you do have Adam be brought in it, I wouldn't mind. After all, they have Emma and the team may need Adam to try to convince Lexa to stay. You're welcome for staying with the fic! I am intrigued and must say that I don't want Lexa to be killed. Emma is being so sweet by promising Jesse to find Lexa. (sighs) Jesse is so in love with her...
MX Babe
2005-07-24 . chapter 6
I like the way u used brennan's covo with lexa in "brother kepper" to give them a chance of finding her again. its a create story, keep going
MX Babe
tigereyes320
2005-07-21 . chapter 3
Be careful if they see you have a song in your fic they will delete the story and possibly you from the site.
bohemianbabe
2005-07-21 . chapter 5
good work! hope to see more soon! i do hope that you let them get togther, but make it hard. lots of disagreement and stuff.
lotta love
JediFeral
2005-07-20 . chapter 5
I like how you had Emma be the one that found her! Thank you! In my opinion, Jesse is going to flip when he finds out she's wounded, LOL! He is sweet that way. Post again soon! And I didn't mind it short. I'm just glad that you took the time to write it and to post. Keep going!
MX Babe
2005-07-18 . chapter 4
I like this chapter aswell. can't wait untill the next chapter. i can't wait to see how they save lexa from this mission, they will won't they?
MX Babe
JediFeral
2005-07-17 . chapter 4
I like this story. I was thinking that maybe, since Lexa probably has already seen pictures of Emma, perhaps Emma could be the one who rescues Lexa. Emma could lead her to safety or another words: Jesse's waiting arms. But if you don't, I won't take it personally. Keep going! It's very interesting.
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