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| StealerOfDreams 2006-08-25 ch 1,  | abuseHA! Aww, thats priceless. Thats going on my favourites list :) I love the idea of Alphas in Dark Angel. Im off to read the sequel! Thanks, Hannah |
| Tanya76815 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this story and it seem something that they would do |
| Serenity Wintirs 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! That was so good. I *loved* what Biggs said to Max. It was so catty. Although I do think that Max could totally kick her **. I am so adding this to my favorites. Is there a sequel for this? I am so about to check! |
| human28 2005-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was really good! i'll go read the sequel now...keep up the good work! |
| CrimsonReality 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abusecool! |
| Kris 2005-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI why stories that... 1.make the 09er's so to speak, bad guys to the others.I don't think they are that stupid to still believe Manticores lies once they were out of Manticore and knew that they had been lied to all thier life, 2. Automatically ASSUME that Alec was the best at Manticore?What? Does Berrisford Mission mean anything to anyone?HE FAILED! ..NO Not that I am saying he was not a good soldier, I am sure he was, but not the best of the best.And I KNOW Zack could hold his own with Alec, escape or no escape..Zack is a stud! PS- If CeCe did slap Max she would KICK HER **!! |
| Nevanroy 2005-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI so loved this. I think my favorite is what Biggs said to Max about he might not but Cece would. I just loved it I hope to see more stuff like this to you. |
| Lotamoxie 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat start! I can see this as a stand-alone, but I think it would work better with a sequel. I really hope that you continue the story. Max is just starting to get back in touch with her instincts and a sequel would be a great place to explore her reactions to her instincts and (natch) get her and Alec together. |
| Alana84 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, great story and you must write a sequel! Plz... Anyway, loved the plot and yay Alec kicked Zack's ** big time, hehe! So know Max can't ignore him anymore! yay. Plz write more... |
| SequoiaUnderwood 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abuseIt was a classy story. it would be cool for a sequel but I'll respect it as a one shot. good job. |
| OriginalProxy 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abuseInteresting idea. I always like the kitty fics. |
| Livy 2005-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease continue this! please! zack is not good enough for max, but why did alec just ignore her?!?!?! gr... explanations needed! |
| elle6778 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abuseGee..I don't know what to say! Feel a bit bad for Zack. Why Alec beat him up if he was not interested in Max? Or is he? A sequel is a good idea! The fight scenes were well written, so well done. |
| HoneyX5-452 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abuseAlright! I am really piting Zack right now! poor boy got his ** kicked! And I always thought that he would be the one that wiins in such a fight! But anyway, amazing fic! I hope you write a sequel! And it would be awesome if you checked out my stuff to! i got some Max/Alec and zack/Max! Ps: this is on my favorite list! |
| calistra 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat, always thought they missed something important between Zack and Alec in the series. Well done. |