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TexasDreamer01
2009-04-15 . chapter 5
*laughs evilly* well, which was voted upon, the dancing, or the kiss and make up after the fight?

;D,
brittney
darkest.Quasar
2009-01-27 . chapter 5
That is the perfect song for HollyArty!! That was really good! :) Me like.
monkey123
2008-07-08 . chapter 5
i love it! it's awesome! it's the best! definately a favourite! i lovde it!
Bluesparks
2008-04-12 . chapter 5
please do a sequel! i loved it, does she wipe fowl, stay with him forever, or do they just keep dancing?
MadeNew
2008-04-08 . chapter 5
Aw. Loved it! It made me laugh. ^_^ Nice job!
starbrightdreamer
2006-08-09 . chapter 5
oh it was good you should right a sequel
Gueneviere
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
absolutely fantastic! but what happens next? olly gets fired? decides to live in fowl manor? come on, write a sequel! pretty please?
Brizo
2006-04-19 . chapter 5
Woh! 5 chaps in one day! Good on you! Great story!! Loved it ha Holly once agian breaking the rules! he he =D

/:/1st female LEPrecon/:/
-R0ck 4ng3l-
2005-09-28 . chapter 3
oh oh ooh! hahaha. sorry this isnt exactly a review but a question...ive been meaning to ask this 4 a while but it seemz that ive reviewed ever chapter of every story (cept this one) that uve writen and they wont let me review it again...but anyway...u say that RainDropzForTears (i absolutly LOVE the story so far..) is on HIATUS...but...watz a hiatus? does that mean ur ditching it?? or does it mean that ur too busy to update? vacation? virus? something else? or does it mean that u need time to think of an idea?? or..watever! o__o;; mention it in your profile or something and let me know if u cant..if u cant, then thatz okay.
An Endless Facade
2005-08-10 . chapter 5
This is an awesome fanfic! I love the ending of this chapter!! I can't wait for the rest.
~Zephyr~
gary loves sporks
2005-08-09 . chapter 5
aww that was cute
fromme2y0u
2005-08-07 . chapter 5
I like the ending for this chapter
x0xSuperNovax0x
2005-07-27 . chapter 5
Great story!! The only thing that I really don't get about AH pairings is...Holly is 3 feet high. Artemis is probably almost double that. There's a major hight problem between them. But anyway, great story!
-R0ck 4ng3l-
2005-07-14 . chapter 4
PLZ DONT STOP THE STORY AT ONLY 5 CHAPTERS!! CONTINUE CONTINUE! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PPLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ
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-R0ck 4ng3l-
2005-07-14 . chapter 5
O I LOVE YOUR STORY!
ITZ SO AWSOME!
U DID SUCH A GREAT JOB WITH ARTY N HOLLY!
I ESPECIALLY LIKE THEN END!! XD! XD! XD!
AW SO GUSHY!
PLZ UPDATE SOON!
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