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autumnlover
2006-08-09
ch 1,
abusehow comes you only have 2 reveiws? that was great! the only thing i didnt like was the d/g bit. how the hell are they supposed to be together? whatever would make you htink that? pm me, and i guess i can find out!

i think you should have split this up into roughly 4 chapters, instead of having one long one-shot. but its your story, not mine ;)

keep the good stuff up!

autumnlover
Laura
2006-02-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseGinny eded up wiht malfoy? ew. i thought she fancied harry?

neway, i thought u culd do with anuther reveiw. so here it is! keep writing!

Laura
FetishFemale
2005-07-13
ch 1,
abuseWow...quite long! Still, it was funny and cute. I like.
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