Reviews for Molly's Return

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cmar 2005-07-19 ch 4,	abuseA very sweet ending, and as you said, may things be happy ever after. Unless you do another story for them... I very much liked the bantering between Tori, Dustin, and Shane, btw, the original three friends back together for the (almost) final scene. And I know 'Secret Demons' will be great too!
garnetred 2005-07-18 ch 4,	abuseExcellent story. Please write soon.
CamFan4Ever 2005-07-18 ch 4,	abuseAw...It's over? So soon? Damn, I was hopin' there'd be more! Oh well, all good things must come to an end. Ok, I cannot empathize how much I want to read 'Secret Demons'...SOON! Please, please, please post it soon! Gives you puppy dog eyes Will there be another installment to this?
CamFan4Ever 2005-07-18 ch 3,	abuseNice! Spicier! Love it! Excellent!
CamFan4Ever 2005-07-18 ch 2,	abuseOh! Spicy!
CamFan4Ever 2005-07-18 ch 1,	abuseVery nice! Love it so far!
AngelMouse5 2005-07-17 ch 4,	abusebetcha i'm the first one to review again! LOL An excellent ending to this story. It was sweet, warm, loving, really well done and just perfect. Love the bit with Tori and Dustin and 'that look' bit, that cracked me up! Great work!
BJvision 2005-07-17 ch 4,	abuseWould have loved to see more interaction with everyone, but still great ending to an awesome story. going to miss the Molly character but at least I can always look back on this story. Can't wait for your next story "Secret Demon" been dying to find out what would happen next after Sentry Duty.
cmar 2005-07-16 ch 3,	abuseVery well done, and nice to see them get together at last. Excellent love scene here, descriptive but not too detailed, and fitting into the story perfectly. Also the confession about Crystal was handled very well, it makes sense that Molly, being psychic, would understand exactly what Shane was going through.
BJvision 2005-07-15 ch 3,	abuseDidn't expect you to integrate what happened in Betrayal but it added a nice twist to the story and really appreciate how understanding Molly was to the situation. Sometimes mental powers come in very handy. Hopefully this little tidbit of info (Shane & Crystal) is brought up in later chapters. Hope to see Molly interact with the other ex-rangers even though Blake might not be involved considering he is on tour. Can't wait to see where you are going with this story. Once again Excellent Chapter.
AngelMouse5 2005-07-15 ch 3,	abuseExcellent chapter my friend, really well written and thought out. The emotion was very well written and you could feel it between the two of them. I love the description of the Academy at night, that was well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
garnetred 2005-07-12 ch 2,	abuseExcellent story. I can't wait to see how their "date" will end. Please update soon.
Weesta 2005-07-12 ch 2,	abuseYeah - Molly's back! I'm glad you decided to do more with this story; I really like Molly and Shane. I loved the "lesson" she taught to Shane's Air class. And if I'd been eating bread with Yak butter for a year, I'd head to MickyD's too! I'm looking forward to reading how you explain/describe an Elemental class - it should be neat! Keep it up!
cmar 2005-07-12 ch 2,	abuseMolly's reunion with Carmen was sweet; even though she's not really a character it's nice to see their friendship mentioned here. Also the part with Shane finding her asleep was sweet, and brought out the more caring side of their relationship. Ha ha, I can sympathize with Molly's craving for fast food - suppresses thoughts of fries and chicken nuggets - and some excellent dialogue throughout, which is no surprise coming from you! Great work as always!
BJvision 2005-07-12 ch 2,	abuseThere first real date was done really well. I particularly like the vulnerability with Molly about her fighting ability because it shows that even with this immense power at her disposal she still feels inadequate due to her lack of ninja training, but Shane is going to clear up that mess. Carmen and Molly what can i say humourous. Can't wait for the next

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