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| Graymoon 74 2008-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is good. I like that he is being an ** and moving her. This is an interesting take on things =) |
| sye04 2006-06-12 ch 6,  | abuseyou have to continue to update! this story is getting good! |
| PhDelicious 2005-09-12 ch 6, | abuseGood setup. Just waiting for the follow through. And don't worry about the title. I'm sure there are bunches of stories with similar titles. |
| ashley 2005-09-12 ch 6, anon. | abusewrite another chapter! please |
| cherry-kiss-red 2005-09-12 ch 6, | abuseyou wrote "to be continued"! Then please continue! |
| Windslayer 2005-09-08 ch 6, | abusedude you better update soon! |
| ericlover57 2005-09-03 ch 6, | abuseYou HAVE to update! I am BEGGIN you! I love this whole story, and i am DYING to know what happens next! |
| em j 2005-09-01 ch 6, | abuseWow - the suspense! Please post more asap - I'm loving this story. |
| Silent as the Grave 2005-08-30 ch 6, | abuseAwesome chapter! |
| Shortymae 2005-08-28 ch 6, anon. | abusewow...I LOVE your story. please go on! :) |
| Jenny 2005-08-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is such a great story! Please put the next chapter up I'm dying from the suspense! Keep up the good work! |
| Cambria 2005-08-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseGreat story! Well written too. I can picture everything happening. Please keep writing. |
| alias101 2005-08-23 ch 6, | abuseplease update asap! i love this story |
| KatyL 2005-08-23 ch 6, | abuseHey keep going! I'm really enjoying this story so don't make me wait too long for the next bit. As far as constructive critism goes...er...if i think of some i'll let you know. oh, er don't let gris go too over the top please - he's at a good level at the mo though. |
| bene 2005-08-22 ch 6, | abuseI don't know how this is possible but I only discovered your story today. Two words : killer suspense! You've got the characters well. Please keep going and post next chapter soon. thank you! |