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Reviews For: The Devils Chosen

Rose de Sharon
2007-12-17
ch 1,
abuseHi, Spawn of Darkness!
Thank you very much for your nice review! I liked your story too - even if I am unfamiliar with the X-Men universe, it was intriguing. I hope you will post some new chapters soon!
Saladin's gift is mentionned in the last chapter of "The Barley Field Lady", about pearls, diamonds and other gems being hidden in Balian's saddlebags. Saladin wanted to express his gratitude towards his sister's champion but he had to do it discreetly, since some of his men are resenting Balian's presence among them. He also wanted to give our hero a chance to leave the Holy Land before war begins, and to return in France a rich man, even if deep down Saladin knows Balian won't abandon the people of Jerusalem to their fate.
Best regards,
Rose de Sharon
slaughtergirl
2006-04-25
ch 2,
abuseFinally you posted chapter 2...that was interesting.
...and 'gasp' at last you learn't to spell...lol.
Its entertainingly original.
Ferret Love
2006-04-23
ch 1,
abuseNo i didn't read. But still I am proud of u. 2 Stories. Well done.
-Pulls his cheeks- Ur growing up so fast.
hehehehe
I'm not in ur fave authors
Is that how u treat Blood?
slaughtergirl
2006-02-21
ch 1,
abuseIt's good, but alot of spelling mistakes, grammer and punctuation problems... my advice edit it. Again the story line is good.
Foo
2005-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou may want to work on your spelling, other than that I think its pretty good
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