Yay, we finally hear about the manticore incident! Great chapter, by the way, I love your 'founders' universe!

UPDATE SOON!

TheNotedMusician

So, if I leave this review, you'll update? Because really, asking for a review in return for a chapter is not such a bad deal on my part. You're the one who has to write the next chapter. Though judging from the quality of the work you've put out so far, I might be willing to wait as long as it takes for you to write the next installment. I absolutely adored this story as well as your previous one's in the Harry Potter universe.

I will be anxiously awaiting your next installment.

Kira

Gr! Update soon! Please? No, really.
(The cliffie thing was quite funny, by the way.)

UPDATE! I NEED YOU TO UPDATE! This is fantastic stuff - I want moree!! By the way which one is the Boarhunts and Dragons one - unless it's the A Day in the Lives of the Lion and the Snake? Is Salazar a vampire?

Very good. Again, some of the wording needed work, but I really do like your writing style. Maybe try to make your sentences a little more active. "Manticores’ habits were know by him..." should be "He knew many habits of the manticore..." or something. By making it passive, you sap the story of its action qualities.

Again, good. I'm impressed, and quite glad I'm getting to beta someone who can actually write.

OMG Please update this story. It's by far the best story about Founders that I have read. Please update it *puppy eyes*

Not a cliffie! And you haven't updated it in a year...Are you still planning to update?

(blinks)
(mutters->) Godric u idiot

ok, nice fic.
long chap 2, hope da next(and others) r da same.
here's ur reveiw from me & a question if u don't mind... Was Sal really a vamp??

Anyway, added 2 alerts

Hey, just found your stories again. This series is a lot of fun.

I just have to say, I love your Godric and Salazar. :) I've always liked the idea of fics revolving around the founders of Hogwarts 9these two in particular) but finding actual fics that portrays them in a way I like seems rather difficult. Yours are great, and I really hope you update soon. :)

hey!! that was cruel and unnecessary. (mutters) evil writers, and vile cliffhangers, and the cruel people of the world! (stops muttering) now, please show some mercy on the people who would enjoy knowing the rest of the story adn update it!

Salazar a Vampire? Interesting take on it, altthough it says in the CoS that the statue of slytherin looked like a monkey. I hope you write more, because recently I've been trying to get into founders fics.

I want another chapter!
Your Founder's fics are wonderful! And Vampire!Salazar rules. Really.

cute so far. i can't wait to read more.

Love it! Godric's hair reminds me of my boyfriend's (he backcombs it). And his dippiness...

I don't quite understand how Salazaar went hunting *after* sunrise, given his a vampire, but I might just have read it wrong. It was still a really good fic, and you're right that there isn't enough about the founders.

Your spelling is odd, in that half is British ('leapt' over 'leaped', 'grey' instead of 'gray') but part American ('favored' over 'favoured'). Just an observation.

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