I really like how you portray Temari! Well done. There's only one thing I would say, though. It's spelt "Chouji," or, at least, I think it is... Hey, maybe I'm wrong. Either way... is there going to be a Chapter 3?

I read chapter 1, Uzumaki Naruto, and I have to say: you captured the relationship with Naruto and Hinata perfectly!!

interesting... it seems like a fun story line. Good job! ^^ Cannot wait for more! ^^

nice, now i wanna know what happens next!

Hey yo, it's Gen. Awesome story, but keep going with it. Why did the old dude choose Naruto to succeed him? What happened to Tsunade?? >_< T_T sorrow, sadness.

Ahh . . . Liz, Liz, Liz. *lol* What can I say? (this is Sarah by the way -_-') I'm not usually an AU person, but I'll have to say that this made me happy. ^_^ All of the blushing!Hinata and oblivious!Naruto was great. But now I want Kabuto! Where's Kabuto?! *lol* Shall see you next chapter then, yes?
-Mizutaka

You seem to write well.

What i'm most interested in is the pairing of shika and temari. I feel they make a good couple althoguh there isn't much interaction with them. Just a lot of foreshadowing.

Anyways, i'm not really a naruXhina fan, but more the shika temari fan. Well i'm interested how this will turn out.

^_^
keep writing

Yondaime, head of the Shinobi. Kyuubi, head of the Akatsuki. In my opinion, very clever. I really like the concept. So, who else is in the Shinobi. I know this is going to be good and that Naruto is still going to be oblivious to Hina-chan's feelings. Now, really, why him? I'm not insulting Naruto because he's really cool, but if he doesn't have the Kyuubi, what's up? Orochimaru, you're going to get your scaly tail kicked. Update soon. Ja ne.

Well, not bad. The idea of the gangs is kinda original (though still, who from the Mist is going to be in the Shinobi... and why does everyone thinks Mist was allied wth the Leaf?).
Anyways, I'll be looking out for new chapters (right after I get back).
Nice start.