 Sakine 1/18/11 . chapter 1"they scare me" 3 made my whole day! |
 ED68 9/19/10 . chapter 1"Wow! Tenten! I never realized what talent you have! You are clearly more powerful then me!" exclaimed Tenten's idol, Tsunade.
"Yes! Go Tenten! You're the strongest kunoichi in Konoha!" cheered Lee.
"Wow. I never realized how powerful you are. It's pretty obvious I am the weak one and you are superior. I might as well give up and train alone, since my skills are nothing compared to yours," said Neji...keep dreaming Tenten...keep dreaming...
"I DIDN'T KNOW WAKING UP ON THE WRONG SIDE OF THE BED COULD MAKE OU CRANKY! WHAT IF I'M WAKING UP ON THE WRONG SIDE EVERY MORNING?" screamed Lee.
"I didn't wake up on the wrong side, I woke up the wrong way," Tenten muttered. Lee frowned.
"What was so wrong about it?" he questioned. Tenten whipped her head in Lee's general direction.
"Some insane maniac charged into my bedroom and screamed through a megaphone to wake me up," she growled.
"That's weird. That's the same way I woke you up," said Lee...lol...lee is so stupid! heehee...this made me giggle...
"Can I go home now?" said Neji from the kitchen. "The kitchen is beginning to scare me. You have turtle salt shakers and turtle oven mitts and… the kitchen magnets… they scare me." thats so cute of Neji...*awwwwws all over him*
LOVED THE STORY! it was very well written and i enjoyed it alot! |
 Weaponized Mind 8/9/08 . chapter 1actually IF tenten had the Sharingan, and IF she had a child with Neji, then the child would only enharit one of the 'gans. why? Because, uh, well,um.. i think this counts as an example, Lets say a mother had green eyes, and the father has blue eyes, the child will not have, green and red eyes! this is because some traits are dominet and some are recessive, you won't beable to have both, unless like kakshi you got it transplanted in(but then you kids couln't have it), or there is a way to have diffrent colors eyes genticly , but i don't know how it works. either way, Great Fic! |
 SmallButPowerful 10/18/07 . chapter 1I love the story.
I think there should be a Sharinkugan. Or maybe the kid would end up with one eye byuakugun and one eye sharingan. . . Or maybe the kid would end up with half of his eyes byuakugan ad half sharingun! Or the kid could have one eye Sharinkugan and the other eye normal! Or MAYBE-
Sorry about that, slight sugar rush. |
 PanzerBun 2.0 7/3/07 . chapter 1What exactly did Lee do to make TenTen go with him?
Or should I not ask? XD |
 VanillaMostly 6/9/07 . chapter 1HAHA THAT'S SO FUNNY! XD great story... and yeah, it's too bad that Tenten isn't an Uchiha... |
 Alusy 5/31/07 . chapter 1Hahaha, I loved your story. Very funny xD
And the notes at the bottom were awesome. The 'Sharinkugan’ is awesome. Anywho, good job. |
 The Reading Maid 5/13/07 . chapter 1Oh my gosh this was hilarious! I love Team Gai, and Neji, and I think that Gai and Lee are two of the funniest characters in the whole Naruto world. Really great story! And I won't tell you to update because...
1) This is a one-shot
2) You told me not to tell you to update (which would be stupid b/c this is a one-shot)
3) I don't want you to laugh at me and think I'm stupid.
Again, great story! |
 ravengal 12/12/06 . chapter 1HAHAHA! Thanks! I got a good laugh outta that! Lee and Gai were absolutely positely spot-on IC... Neji was funny with his 'Eep... turtles... everywhere...' thing and Tenten was cool, as always. _
ravengal out x
P.S. I wonder what Tenten's surname is... Will we ever know? *crickets chirrip in background* Guess not... |
 lCe28 11/17/06 . chapter 1the ending note was funnier than the story... hehe... XP |
 Sauronia 10/21/06 . chapter 1The way you made Neji act was just HILARIOUS. |
 Toa 10/13/06 . chapter 1This was a fun story! Write some of ur hilarious fics! |
 silverdragon994 9/8/06 . chapter 1...right...sharigkugan...yea, i go the memo...ANYWAYS! luv the story! |
 Sage347 8/2/06 . chapter 1*dies laughing* |
 ashteabear 8/1/06 . chapter 1heh, funny...i cant think of anything to say. |