You have to know that I had typed a review of this story already, but the site was being buggy and never sent it. So I saved it to my computer so I could go back and re-submit it to you.

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You know I absolutely love all of the astrology stuff littered throughout this story. I wonder whether other people get it, though. Whether they think it's annoying, or just quirky.
While I can't see Remus being expressly interested in astrology, I can see that if he found it even mildly interesting, he would become an expert on the subject.
I was really hoping that he and September would have a whole conversation about it/involving it, because I thought it would make for some nice double-meanings. But discussing astrology is the kind of thing you and I would do, not Remus and September.
I also liked that the 3 signs you used for Remus are Pisces (which IS his sign), and Cancer and Virgo. Because I play him with a Cancer ascendant (which would explain why September would first think he's a Cancer), and a Virgo moon. When she said that, I half-expected him to tell her that he was a Pisces, but had Cancer rising. Bah, my self-indulgent fantasies.

In this story, Andrew is definitely NOT like he is normally. He was so... so. If he were acting normal, he and Remus might be friends.
The idea of September being friends with Andrew and Ashael is interesting, especially if you add Remus to the mix. They'd never stop discussing things! We'd never be able to RP it, because Lucy would kill us out of boredom.

I have to say, September/Remus certainly is one of the stranger relationships, isn't it?

I still think that Remus and September should hook up. That would be so cute…but then, to really shake things up, hook the werewolf dude up with the bisexual guy thingymajig. Now THAT would be so cute…

Bye bye,
Very night,
Happy burnings,
A Wraith’s love:

Jessex Johnson

hey, I have just found the link to your profile again on my computer, and I am rereading all your harry potter stuff, it is amazing, and I hope you will continue all the continuable ones, especially BTT and the Mauraders Era one with guests... those were really ghood ones... I know you don't write much humor anymore, but if you could start writing those stories again it would be amazing and I think lots of people would flock over to read them!

Hey! Long time no... talk? See? Eh, whatever.

I liked it. I mean, sure, it didn't really have a plot, but it was GOOD, and that's all that matters.

Keep it up, it's nice to see you write some good nonslash Harry Potter!

Love,
Pinky

ooh, spooky... I really liked the ending...and the dialogue was very nice and soothing...