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Proud to be an X-Nerd 2007-07-04 ch 1,	abuseOk, that was really interesting, but I'm totally confused. What in the world is going on? I get that your using a female Batman character. But I don't recognize anyone but Robin. ;)
kiragecko 2006-03-12 ch 1,	abuseOkay, okay, I'll review. As I already said, great story. Are the aliens Lobo's wife was real (DC real, not here real)? I was upset when you killed Lobo - like I said, he's really cool. This story used up an entire afternoon when I was supposed to be doing school. I don't think reading Fan-Fic is a healthy habit.
Jinxeh 2006-03-11 ch 11,	abuseThough I'd reviewed for this chapter already. o.0 Aww...the sweetness of this chapter...it burns...o.0 But it's a good kind of burning, really. :) Aw...it's the epilogue... grr... ~.~ Ah, well, always more writing to look forward to from you, eh? There'd better be, anyways... ^_~ Gotta go--my chemistry review calls to me. Ick... Lata!
trecebo 2006-03-09 ch 11,	abuseDangit! You made me cry. Again. Lobo is gone. Dude. sniff
Kusco 2006-03-08 ch 1,	abuseWell here it is my review of this first chapter! ducks because it's so late. Pretty interesting. The characters interact pretty well it's fun seeing them talk. At the same time it is slightly confusing to keep track of them all and figure out whats going on. Not because you didn't write it well but because there's just a lot of information to take in. I still liked it. I'll have to read more.
Jinxeh 2006-02-21 ch 10,	abuseThe family tree...confuzzling, but interesting to see how everyone ties together like that. You should check out my family tree--I have four different pairs of direct grandparents. DON'T ask. She frowned at him thoughtfully. "You look like #$&+." Sounds like the morning greeting at my house: Me: Mornin', mom! Mom: You look like #$&+. Me: Well good morning to you too...mornin', dad! Dad: Get a job. Me: Kay... My parents are rather frightening before they have their coffee. o.0 Lovely chapter. Lobo, we 'ardly knew yah. Update!
trecebo 2006-02-20 ch 10,	abuseYa know, even though you've told me a ba-jillion times who is related to whom and how, it never ceases to amaze me when you start laying it all out. I kinda have David's sense of wonder and belated confusion. His "I've been sort of busy" line was perfect when Narmo teased him. But the wonder and awe part: sah-WEET!
Jinxeh 2006-02-15 ch 9,	abuseWow. You were right. It was rather shocking. o.0 You're good at all of the battle jargon and stuff that comic book people say during fights. I can't pull that of without it sounding cliched. Then again...what comic book comebacks aren't cliched by now? XD. "In yer dreams, bastich!" Lobo swung his hook and caught his twin in the side. "Nobody frags the Bat unless I say." Sounds like me at school about my cousin. "Hey, you can't hit him! I'm the only one allowed to hit him!" XD. Great chapter! Update soon!
trecebo 2006-02-12 ch 9,	abuseWhere to start? Lobo clone? Oy vey! Everyone duck! Head to head combat, battling Lobos...blood. It's intense and almost overwhelming. And...the good Lobo died. :( Man. I hate that. Love David though. He's in such a good position to be the one needed when the One wants him to be. Sigh. Must go and cry. Again. Lobo is...gone. sniff
JuhFreak 2006-02-06 ch 8,	abuseI think perhaps that Ronnie needs to give the city to God. "Her city" indeed. Oh, those Batpeople! (And, my, that first sentence was very long.) You may think I've forgotten, but I really DO intend to draw that picture for you someday! ~J'F
trecebo 2006-02-03 ch 8,	abuseGood thing David is well grounded. All those meta peeps dropping in and he could go a bit insane if he weren't. I like the different convos, the almost absentminded chatting while playing with the 'lima bean' was just...elemental in it's simplicity. How'd ya like those big words? :D Anywho, great chappy...it's late.
Jinxeh 2006-02-03 ch 8,	abuse"Narmo...don't. Don't..." She paused to close her eyes and muster her senses. "Don't want your head imbedded in my wall." "Crud. Didn't think 'a that." Yes, I've said things like that many a time before in my house. I have a twenty-year-old brother who collects swords, and the lock on my door was busted. You do the math. I rather liked this chapter. :) Update soon!
Jinxeh 2006-02-03 ch 7,	abuseI need one a' them stress worms...
trecebo 2005-12-22 ch 7,	abuseAlright! Action, more peeps to keep track of and Lobo on a protective streak. David is feeling left out and Ronnie is on the fritz. Literally. Sheesh. Will the fun never end? Bwah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-aha! cough hack snort..gag...heh.
trecebo 2005-12-08 ch 6,	abuseOkies, I started this at the prologue and had to read til this point. I must say, that to take the entire gang (sort of) and go far into the future and still be tied in...I bow in your general direction. This is so fascinating. Plus, I have a handy-dandy scorecard just to keep up with who is who and such. Can't wait for more...

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