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| sandstar08 2007-10-03 ch 1,  | abuseof course she did. yay allison! |
| CamFan4Ever 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuse*Snicker* Excellent fic! Loved it! |
| Evanescing Dreamer 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseHehe This was great. You captured House perfectly, there were so many wonderful lines in this. Keep up the great job of writing House. :o) |
| xanya-forever 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseAnother very cute fic! I love how you give House that softer side that is so obviously lurking beneath his wonderful stubble. It's kind of sad, though, the way he's always trying to deny himself the pleasures of love and all that. I guess that's what happens when you're as damaged and twisted as he is... I really like this line "He preferred not to look at her eyes. They were entirely too pretty for someone who required his ridicule." because it showed that exact point, and it was very well characterised. I loved his invitation to take Cameron home, because it was so... him. Anyway, I enjoyed this a lot! |
| jadedvixen 2005-09-07 ch 1, | abuseIncredible. You write the two of them so well. Such tension, and very in character. Great work. |
| Shire cat 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseSweet. GOod style too. |
| Regina Halliwell 2005-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAnother awesome House fic! love it, love it, love it!! |
| mossley 2005-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI say you did a great job for having only seen three episodes. And I loved the ending - a great way to end the story. |
| earthdrago 2005-07-11 ch 1, | abusehmm, only having seen 3 episodes sounds kinda familiar. Where do you hail from? Anyway, a lovely little first fic. You kept on the characters and all, and did much better than most people who have seen all the episode, yet seem to write stories by letting their cats sit on the key board. I liked it :) |
| Belligerent-road-pylon 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseAw, Cute! I loved the end line "There was no way in hell she had just put him in a good mood." VERY House! |
| michele 2005-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am very excited to see your name on this fic. I'm assuming you're the CSI author, too. I love your writing! Great stuff. Having seen the whole season of House, I'd have to say that you've got the characters down pretty well. Looking forward to more. |
| runs with sissors 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseSomehow, I really enjoyed this. You write beautifuly. |
| PhantomGirl 2005-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it, in fact I really like it! please write more you're really good! |
| Psyfi 2005-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot bad for a first attempt. Keep writing. You're very good. |
| DaVinci13 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, I was really surprised to find you'd written a story about House. I generally tend to avoid them, because I'm not so optimistic about how many people would actually be able to write him well and make it as hilarious as the show, but I forced myself to read yours because... just because you're such a good writer. And I thought it was really good! You got him down perfectly, and every line he said I could really imagine him saying it on the show. You did a perfect job of writing House, way to go. ;) And it was an interesting change from your CSI stories. You should write more of House - but don't forget CSI! He he. Sorry, I had to add that last bit. Anyways, great writing and can't wait for whatever you come up with next. |