-jumps around wildly- I SWEAR, there are no well written lily/james fan fics, so after i found deflating i was like HOLY SHEET THAT'S SO GOOD. AND NOW I'M GOING TO EAGERLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE OF THIS STORY...because i love it. ;]

Are you going to update this?

ooh cool update

Hi! Okay, so it appears from your profile as if you've disappeared from the face of the planet, but I figured in case this means anything at all I should let you know that I absolutely adored this opening chapter and would love it if you ever decided to update this!

I get it if you don't want to, I have a few stories that I never want to look at again, but that's mainly because they're complete rubbish and you definately don't have that excuse with this one!

Anyhow, I hope you do decide to update, or that you at least let us know if you aren't intending to.

I should probably leave an actual review rather than just ask you to come back... so, reasons that you should come back...

This is a really fun concept, I really enjoyed reading it and apparently tons of other people did too judging by the number of reviews you have for only one chapter!

You write absolutely beautifully, grammer mistakes tend to irk me to no end and there were absolutely none in this, plus there was a little something extra... a little bit of magic that made this and everything else of yours that I've read just such a pleasure to sink into... and that's something really worth developing, hopefully you know that and are very busy developing it and that's why you aren't posting anymore!

Anyway if that isn't reason enough to come back then there's no reason in the world that you will!
Cheerio
Ashlyn

i bet you hear (or read acctually) this all the time, but there's nothing else i can really say.
i love it! lol and you need to update! please! *puppy dog eyes*
xox Kitty

now what?

you're not dead are you? you haven't updated since 2005! please please please don't be dead! you need to finish!

Hey this was really good- very funny. I guess since its been like, three years, your not gunna update. shame that. Good story though.

U've got to upd8 man! Superbicious job! I love it!

I like it quite a lot! You write excellently. Update, maybe?

I love this! You write really well, and you've got their characters perfect, well done :)
are u going to carry it on? please do!
x

i love this story!
it sounds like it could really go somewhere good so please update!

I like the idea! I really enjoy your style of writing, and I hope you post on here soon!

Sorry I'm not signed in, but I really am a person here.

I liked the description of this story, but I thought Lily came off as just a bit too...cold, I guess. I always imagind her as fiery and tempermental. There wasn't much of that that I noticed.

But that's just my opinion.

No grammatical errors. That's rare.

Heiress

Nice! Update soon!