I like how detailed everything is _ everyone seems in character and the story is very...real? I'm not sure how to phrase it...either way, I hope you update soon!

Alas, it is such a shame that you stopped this fanfic. It was absolutely wonderful, and I would have liked to see more interaction between Snake and Ocelot. However, it's just not meant to be. xD I am glad I encountered this fanfic, despite the fact that it will probably forever be a cliffhanger.

It's a pity you gave up on this story. It's really good, and I would love to read more.

you totally have to finish this story, i wanna know how it ends _

*gives you the hand gesture*

You HAVE to continue this. I love it, you have Ocelot pegged perfectly... poor kitty boy, being picked on.

Great fic please continue.

I love this story, it's so well written. Please please update, I wanna see what happens next between Snake and Ocelot _

This is a great, well written story. Looking forward to the next chapter !

I love your Ocelot...

Please go on!

Still reading and loving. Ouchies for stitching up cuts without pain relief but I guess that's in strict supply in warzones.

Laughs for "Swollen head syndrome", cringes for Ocelot's past. Some abuse at the hands of a certain eletric russian?

Later!

Very good, I like this quite a bit, please keep writing.

-May the fics be with you.

m very good! yay! keep it up!

So John and Ivan mean the same thing? I love these little snippets you put in.

My favourite part so far has to be this:

‘I said, take off your pants.’

‘You first,’ Snake growled.

Snake's so ignorant/innocent that this comment's bordering on cute. I suppose I'd be grumpy too if I was that beat up. And he can't even fight anymore? Ocelot's gonna help him escape, right? And you've still managed to convey OCelot's naivety whilst keeping him deadly. He can sure be nasty to Snake when he wants to. (But his time in med should be the perfect "punishment" *evil grin*)

Well, I'm still interested to see how this turns out. It's obvious you've put heaps of effort into this... dammit, review people! :)

Poor Ocelot. His pride is truly being torn to shreds. Though I suppose he didn't have much choice (and it's all in the name of good fiction!) Funny references to the actual game i.e. the mousetrap. Guess he doesn't recognise it.

This chapter just...completely demolished Ocelot's ego lol XD

There's something about this chapter that I really like, though...I'm not sure what, but this chapter is my favorite by far anyway.

Can't wait for more