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| lari 2008-07-11 ch 9, anon. | abuseperfect I enjoyed every moment I was reading your fanfiction! LOVED! |
| tcl7189 2008-05-16 ch 9,  | abuseNeat story...Liked it much...I never feel like my stories are 100 % how I want them either...lol |
| Miharu Kawashi 2006-12-06 ch 9, | abuseVery emotional story. I liked it a lot. Poor Kenshin and Aoshi though. Two pregnant women to deal with. I'm sure Kaoru on her own is quite a handful! Ja ne! |
| Miharu Kawashi 2006-12-06 ch 8, | abuseI saw a little error in this chapter. Near the end you wrote "Cautiously, Aoshi and Kenshin approached the small ninja girl," instead of Sano and Kenshin. Thought I would alert you. On to the next chapter. |
| Valese 2006-07-21 ch 9, | abuseoo very nice very nice. great fic, through and through, tho i understand ur feelings about hae ryuu. im currently writing my own A/M fic right now...and having a similar trouble (tho i think i managed to, er, circumnavigate it) overall, i found it to be a great fic, you should be proud ^_^ |
| Valese 2006-07-21 ch 8, | abuse*big girly sappy sigh* AW! so kawaii! that was a great ending hehe. now everyones happy!! im glad she realized he was happy with her ^_^ |
| Valese 2006-07-21 ch 7, | abusehahahahahaha kenshin...a girl? hahaha *wipes tears from eyes* i must say that *did* help the angsty feeling with aoshi. and aoshi isnt dead. i just know it. theyll take him back and megumi will save him again. *isnt worrying* |
| Valese 2006-07-21 ch 6, | abusewell, misao taking on all those people while shes pregnant...sounds like she changed her mind about aoshi. i knew she would! but will she be ok? aoshi will find a hidden strength and break free, i jus know it! |
| Valese 2006-07-21 ch 5, | abuseaw hes finally seeing the truth! haha figures the one time aoshi will be good to misao, she pushes him away in defense. thei hav such a sadly ironic relationship, ne? |
| Valese 2006-07-21 ch 4, | abuseaw so sad already! poor misao and aoshi!! its like theyre destined to be perpetually followed by pain and suffering, ne? |
| Valese 2006-07-21 ch 3, | abusewow that was a scary dinner scene. i could feel the tension...@__@ and the ryuu guy...man figures thered be someone out there who wants to kill aoshi |
| Valese 2006-07-21 ch 2, | abusehahahahaha he catches them then! im sorry, but sano/misao always made me laugh. o aoshis in for a surprise. im finding this all more funny than dramatic for the time being haha and loving it, by the way |
| Valese 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abusehm wat happened? confused... and wat happened at the Aoiya? i hav the feeling aoshi tried to kiss her or something, realized wat he did, and pushed her away, so she ran away...am i right? |
| dkadkf 2006-04-10 ch 7, anon. | abusekenshin has the cross shaped scar on his left cheek not his right one |
| AnimeSiren 2005-08-26 ch 9, | abuseGood story i can actually invision that happening but with several slight changes. |