great story, loved it!

lol kenshin's a grl at the end of the story! XD loving the story so far, too bad it's coming to an end. it's kind of ooc though, for aoshi and misao. usually misao can't walk away from aoshi, but she did a past few chapters. i forgot what else i was about to mention, but overall this has been a sweet story!

oh i love it

perfect

I enjoyed every moment I was reading your fanfiction! LOVED!

Neat story...Liked it much...I never feel like my stories are 100 % how I want them either...lol

Very emotional story. I liked it a lot. Poor Kenshin and Aoshi though. Two pregnant women to deal with. I'm sure Kaoru on her own is quite a handful! Ja ne!

I saw a little error in this chapter. Near the end you wrote "Cautiously, Aoshi and Kenshin approached the small ninja

girl," instead of Sano and Kenshin. Thought I would alert you. On to the next chapter.

oo very nice very nice. great fic, through and through, tho i understand ur feelings about hae ryuu. im currently writing my own A/M fic right now...and having a similar trouble (tho i think i managed to, er, circumnavigate it) overall, i found it to be a great fic, you should be proud _

*big girly sappy sigh* AW! so kawaii! that was a great ending hehe. now everyones happy! im glad she realized he was happy with her _

hahahahahaha kenshin...a girl? hahaha *wipes tears from eyes* i must say that *did* help the angsty feeling with aoshi. and aoshi isnt dead. i just know it. theyll take him back and megumi will save him again. *isnt worrying*

well, misao taking on all those people while shes pregnant...sounds like she changed her mind about aoshi. i knew she would! but will she be ok? aoshi will find a hidden strength and break free, i jus know it!

aw hes finally seeing the truth! haha figures the one time aoshi will be good to misao, she pushes him away in defense. thei hav such a sadly ironic relationship, ne?

aw so sad already! poor misao and aoshi! its like theyre destined to be perpetually followed by pain and suffering, ne?

wow that was a scary dinner scene. i could feel the tension...@_@ and the ryuu guy...man figures thered be someone out there who wants to kill aoshi

hahahahaha he catches them then! im sorry, but sano/misao always made me laugh. o aoshis in for a surprise. im finding this all more funny than dramatic for the time being haha and loving it, by the way