|Reviews for Together|
| eridani 7/10/05 . chapter 1
Very sweet. Considering English is your second language, your grammar isn't bad. You could use a beta reader perhaps to polish it off for you, but I wouldn't worry too much about it.
| Sora plus Kairi equals love 7/10/05 . chapter 1
aww it was so good. and so sad! aww!
| CSkywalker 7/10/05 . chapter 1
That was awesome! Alittle more detailed than I'm used to with these kind of stories but that didn't bother me one bit! Great Job!