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| Sakura22222 2008-08-22 ch 1,  | abusePregnant Winry? Everyone duck! |
| flamingo174 2008-01-04 ch 9, | abusewell i think this was a great story although I know u hear this alot that the chapters are short so I won't tell you about that. and umm well I do want to say though that you need to be a little more discreptive on scenes and I also think you are moving the scenes a little to just try to take your time and let the chapter flow okay? but other than that I love the plot and it is so great I wish you would update or atleast hurry up on the re-writting them because I can't wait to find out what happens next!lol!! Love the story keep at it!! |
| flamingo174 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseahh I love it please start writing again ! |
| A.D.D.Vengance 2007-09-28 ch 9, | abuseIVE GOT IT! Sara rockbell, am i right? Royai rox my sox! I love this story, so please write some more! For me? please? |
| Bar-Ohki 2007-09-26 ch 9, | abuse*sigh* And it was a good story too... I just hope you pick it back up. |
| Sanaikou 2006-08-27 ch 8, | abuseyes u are evil...big cliff hanger...i almost fell down the cliff this time |
| I SEE TALL PEOPLE 2006-05-19 ch 8, | abusewhoa i feel babd for ed... anyways i like the chapter really good anyways how much more till u get more? |
| blacksakibou 2006-04-23 ch 8, | abuseI'm confused again! XD Some of the parts really confuse me XD Is Claire the one doing the evil deeds, or is it her sister? Or is it both of them? :O Who knows?! I must add this to my Alerts XD |
| Delione 2006-04-23 ch 8, | abusePoor Winry! kidnapped again! Anyway plz update soon! >. |
| '-Sara-Bellz-' 2006-04-15 ch 8, | abuseI like the story! By any chance, do you know if any other station is airing FMA? cuz it's like my fave show. And do you knoe how many volumes of the manga are there? Thanx, I.B. Stoopid |
| Cali-May 2006-04-01 ch 8, | abusegreat chapie hope you update soon... up better,, j.k but seriously please update soon... FMA's ended *sniff sniff* okay gotta work on the ranbalings. Know that Im done reading I am forced to clean! No! Okay gonna stop rambaling on know.. but once again great fanfic please update soon I'll be waiting |
| Cali-May 2006-04-01 ch 7, | abusegood chapie Im reading the whole thing... I know but this story got me hooked like I have anything else to do so ..yeah. oh and your a inuyasha fan too. I luv inuyasha! but slowly have been going over to the FMA siide... Kagome lets just say isn't my favorite character. Okay know Im rambaling on any ways Luv ur story its already on my favorites! Brickwall746 ur an awsome writter.. keep on writtin Cali-May ++ - |
| Cali-May 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuselove the chapter very interesting :0) |
| Chainless 2006-03-10 ch 8, | abuseLovely job! Thanks a ton for commenting on my stories, while I'm at it. It's very nice to meet you - I be teh ever so l33t Hotaru. No, I'm not l33t at all, but it would be cool, wouldn't it? Scratch that out. I look forward to our next meeting. |
| Shadows Desire 2006-03-10 ch 8, | abuseAwesome! Please keep up the good work and update soon, I'll be looking forward to it! |