This is a great story. I like the basic concept of Bible history in Middle-earth, and I can see you reverence the Bible as you write. I am most interested to see what will happen in Egypt (I mean Íjhapto). Are the Avari so far from (for lack of a better term) Eru's way that they worship other gods, or concepts of the Valar so different from the truth that it comes to the same thing? That could be rather interesting to write (and read).

I love all your work! Please keep writing and posting!

Faerthurin

You've done the style of writing so well!

let me guess... Joseph by any chance?

I'm liking it. This is the first fanfiction I've encountered where an author has tried to make a direct Biblical paralel inside a previously built and molded world, while staying true to the spirit of that world. ...Would you do us the favor of letting us see more of Galathon's life soon? Even though a certai amount can be predicted as a matter of course, I'm curious to see how you'll carry it out--and hopeful that you'll keep a level of cleanliness involved and not play up on some elements too heavily.

Wow. I must admit I like this adaption of the story. Well done on yet another great work of writing.

Nela

aww, galathon made a friend! and a human one as well as the horse. so he is learning how to speak the language eh? good for him. see ya next time!

so, galathon is striving for a goal once again. good to be able to read and review! off to read 7 now, ta ta

It's good. I like this fic, it is so realistic.

I really like how this is the same yet different. The developing friendships between the elf and the dudes is very cool. It shows a depth to the plot, not to mention laying ground work for later on...nudge nudge...

Excellent, like your other tales. This is a very good parallel to the Biblical story, I can't wait to see it finished!

The convo between the slaver and the boy was good. But who is Larry? This Larry just popped up at the end...*scratches head and mumbles about newfangled Elves and their weird naming schemes*

The brothers and the guilt...you played it well with the anger and grief.

This story seems familiar. It is good. Poor Galathon!
~Erasuithiel of Laurelindorenan

great job! you got the whole story line right. cept it says "When they killed the deer in the pity," instead of "pit". next is egypt right?

You know, those brother's aren't any nicer this time around but you have done Olion with compassion while putting him an a hard place. Good job.

Sorry I didn't review sooner, but I loved this chapter! And how well you parallel the real story. I hope you can update again soon! hugs, Princess Siara