Ok, I'm crying now. No wait, I think I'm actually sobbing... I hope you're proud of yourself for bringing a grown woman to tears!

*sniffle*

Great story. I'm looking forward to reading (and crying to) more of your stories.

Very good insight into how Grissom would react in that type situation. I also like the way you brought his feelings about religion into it. Great job.

this is good. why did you end it there?

Wow. That was some powerful writing there. I love a swearing, drunk Grissom. This is the kind of scene the show would give us--utterly revealing, yet causing no real progress between the uncouple. I love it. It begs for a sequel, but I also love the brevity of it--leaving us to imagine what next. Excellent job.