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| vipercharmed 2008-04-18 ch 1,  | abuseI know when People call u Ice Queen is so frustrating. |
| donttouch 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuse*giggles* yay! |
| Dreamer22 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuse::snickers:: well done |
| Kandra13 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abusei love it |
| Laura-trekkie 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThat's certainly one way to stave off the cold :). |
| *Angel~Eyes* 2006-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abusecutness.great story.sequel maybe? |
| Rinne 2005-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI read this out of vague interest to see how decent it was. It's better written than a lot of stuff, but there's a few things you should be careful of: 1. Very cliched idea, being stuck in an elevator and something romantic happening. That doesn't mean that cliches can't be written well, but you need to be careful. 2. Wrong word usage. 'defiantly' instead of 'definitely', 'venerable' instead of 'vulnerable'. In particular, the second one made me laugh, which I don't think was something you would have wanted with this story. |
| Me 2005-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa, awsome dude. I love D/G and I loved your fic. Great job. |