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Tally Solleni
2005-11-29
ch 3,
abuseI really like this story! I guess I'm weird for also liking the pairing of MegumixMomo...it seems like we're the only ones!
I just thought I'd point out some very small problems: Saki and Megumi's dad isn't dead. Also, Megumi's power is not automatically triggered every time he says someone's name (although that made things much more dramatic, I'll admit). As proof, he refers to Saki by her name several times, and also addresses Tohru and Arisa by their names.
It's still an AWESOME series, though! Good work!
.X.Phoenix.X.
2005-11-22
ch 1,
abuse:) Love the Megumi Momo one, its so unique, but in an extremely good way. Luff it. :D
SolitaireAikanaro
2005-09-11
ch 3,
abuseNO! You know, I never thought of it as a curse, but in that perspective...This was very well written.

Update!
Skittles1
2005-09-10
ch 3,
abusevery intense. great job!
SolitaireAikanaro
2005-09-08
ch 2,
abuseNo!! That's too sad! NO! You HAVE too continue it!
animefreak
2005-07-11
ch 2, anon.
abuseplease update soon!
Skittles1
2005-07-10
ch 2,
abuseamazing
Skittles1
2005-07-10
ch 1,
abuseooh sounds very interesting!!
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