Reviews for An eye for an eye

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missyme89 2008-03-17 ch 3,	abusebeautifull
missmarty89 2008-03-13 ch 6, anon.	abuseincredible, i loved it, so much emotion. just awesome:)
pmsdevil01 2008-02-10 ch 16,	abuseIs this story over? Or did you give up?
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko 2007-12-12 ch 11,	abuseThis was my favorite part in this chapter. what do you mean by you split mom and dad?” Wyatt asked horrified. “Small side effect.” Chris shrugged trying to hide from his brother’s wrath. “SMALL side effect? Before you were conceived… you split up our parents… before you were even conceived?” He yelled at him. “I didn’t mean to!” “Great…that’s such a relief… now when I am an only child and feel I am missing something, I will remember that… cuz it will be SUCH A COMFORT!” “If it makes you feel better I am pretty sure they slept together last night.” Phoebe shrugged with a smile. “YUKY… NO!” Chris exclaimed disgusted. “I didn’t want THAT much information… I just want to make sure my brother will be born!” Wyatt ended. “Though… I like my parents together.” He gently slapped Chris on the shoulder. When Phoebe said that it had me rolling with laughter. I so needed a laugh today.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko 2007-12-12 ch 9,	abuseThis chapter was amazing it. It had me in tears, right until I hit the review button. Another brillant chapter.
Robin 2007-07-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. I loved this,it was really fun to read and it was great seeing the relationships between Chris and his parents. I love reding about Chris getting hurt..i hope you write more x
Sinful Temptation 2007-06-05 ch 2,	abuseI love you story but, please please stop using the word 'cuz'! It's killing it! Write becasue or 'cause if you must but please, no more cuz!
lotus333 2007-05-27 ch 1,	abuseThis was SO sad!, I cried so hard. Please keep writing! ^__~
Marcus1233 2007-05-07 ch 16,	abuseSigh. I'm disappointed that it's all over, but I didn't regret reading the fic. It's amusing. Good work. My only complain is the 'I am sorry,' The 'I am' part kinda rubbed me the wrong way. Somehow, imagining American using 'I am' instead of the usual 'I'm' is weird.
Marcus1233 2007-05-07 ch 14,	abuse"I am the ruler of POWER…not evil… POWER…Good and evil are concepts that are obsolete, overdone, finish, terminado, finito, kaput… removed from the dictionary…understood?” He ranted angrily. “And yeah… Jeremy happens to be a very good friend of mine, so I am conscious of his feelings!" I really like this line. Shows how fickle the mind of the Haliwell are. I didn't manage to paste this in its corresponding chapter. It's damn annoying to post a review for every chapter. "If we team up and pick on mom!” Chris said, naughtily. “Oh… I like the way you think… no wonder you are my favorite nephew!” Paige smiled, happily." Cute. Real cute.
Marcus1233 2007-05-07 ch 9,	abuseI don't know which is longer..your fic or your rantings to the readers. Grins. Overall, I don't have much problem with your grammar except for the spelling of some of your past tenses. Chris is so damn adorable for his own good. Oprent should be punished more...but I don't feel his pain in your fic...if it was me...(shakes head) I don't own this fic, so it's useless to comment on irrelevant things.
Marcus1233 2007-05-06 ch 2,	abuseGod! I'm tired. A have a case of the cold. And I just ate tons of chocolate. (not a ggod time for me) Add that to my impending doom's day caused by tomorrow's exam and the fact that my imagination's getting out of control...I have a slight tear down my cheek due to your fic. Congratulations on that accomplishment.
xXxMrs Salman KhanxXx 2007-04-12 ch 16,	abusethis one of the best fics of wyatt n chris...this is freaking brilliant
cmtaylor531 2007-01-03 ch 16,	abuseCute story i freaking loved it!
Lichan 2006-08-26 ch 16, anon.	abuseThank you this was exactly what I was looking for in a chris wyatt fic.

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