Another good story! Very good, but once again, sad!

CUTEE!! omg omg omg! that was really wellwritten

omg i cried throguh that whole thing. it was so beautifully written. oh my goodness. i can't believe that kai is died and at the end that was just...there are no words that can descride it. i'm still crying now lol. that story was so beautiful but it was so sad. oh my goodness. good job honestly good frickin job.

AH gosh now i feel stupid! i read this story at school and i'm crying my eyes out! thatr was just so good! (teasrs stops please)...ah and who cares, you can fall, people opinion is just something i don't wanna bother with (yeah i'm fully crying now) gosh that was just to god (i would tslk more, but io need to go to my english class TT_TT)

i totally love it...its so emotional...*Cryiny eyes out*...its really good...^_^

Hey dude, that was totally wicked! But how did he even die? Plze don't stop writing...Laterz

beautiful. the most innocent story i'va had the pleasure of reading. it was perfect actually. i hope there's more! oh wait, i'll just check out your profile page

ltg x

*sobs slitty* WOW! I..wow. i do not know what to say but wow it was a wonderful story. he almost killed himself. Wow did your cat die? Sorry! that was a rude qustion i am such a moron! I wish i had a guardian angel, but who knows maybe i do.
this was a great story keep up the good work.

so sad,so beautiful,so birilliant.
you are a real talented writer.

*snifflz* Oh...That was s0o sweet. I'm actually in tearz. And I haven't cried n 4ever. That is s0o odd tho. @ my grandmother's funeral in February (this year) I swore that after she was barried and I put a red rose on her grave (her request) I heard her talking. I thought I heard her say she loved me and to live my life without crying for her, but remembering the happy times we had. I had been kneeling beside her tombstone. I don't know if I was in my own little world or what but I know that I stood up and whispered the wordz "I love you too." and walking to tha car. When we got in my maw maw's fave song was on Amazing Grace. I than you. For letting me cry for my Maw-Maw...
I don't think I cried quite enuf for her...

god that made me cry! i loved it

That was so sad! I'm gonna cry! Good Job! Keep up the awesome work!

- xImperfectlyX

Oh Kai is Rei's guardian angel, how cute! Man this is making my cry! But I dont get the last part...'I wonder if Tyson is still awake? There’s still so much I need to know about you before I can fully let you go...' that kinda confused me but other than that I loved it! Nice work Blue!

This was sad.

i think im going to cry.

nice work.

Blue ;-;

*sniffsniff* so beautiful...I only have a few pieces of constructive criticism: a little more explanation of why Kai is dead would have been nice. The emotions were so strong and so beautiful...but maybe describing more of what was happening...like Rei's breath picked up as he slowly picked up the knife the air around him thickening...etc. The senses like seeing, tasting, smelling, touching, and hearing ^^ as long as you address those as best you can, you'll be good to go.

Also, you could have maybe included a flashback of Kai dying, or first arriving at heaven but-but...god...this was beautiful Bluey. I usually don't even come close to crying when reading something, but you got me as near as anyone has ever come before. The beautiful angst it was just so touching...*whimper*

I WANT A SEQUEL XD hehe ^^ Thank you so much for sharing this with me lovely