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smaginn
2008-05-17 . chapter 31
i feel sad about sector V losing numbuh 5
but arent they, like 13 by now?
so maybe...
i dont know... they would have found out she wasnt actually betraying knd?
i haf no idea
i like the way maurice didnt break cree's heart, and cree found out she loved chand on her own (kind of)
star
2007-06-30 . chapter 31
Love the story.
Can you make some Maurice and Abigail stories?
Please.
I love this couple.
Mooncloud881
2006-10-02 . chapter 21
oh. my. gawd. I LUFF THIS STORY SO MUCH! Your such a great writer and i enjoyed reading this story so much! While i was reading it i tired to picture all the characters as real people rather than cartoons, and Chad sounded so hawt ^.^ you did i rele good job with his personality and he was by far my most favorite char. I cant wait to read some other stories from you. I'm almost sad this story's over!

keep up the good work! :P
BabyGooGoo2
2006-10-01 . chapter 31
this story was great and well worth the wait.
Evilevergreen
2006-09-05 . chapter 31
Finally! It's been days since I've been able to open a story. So when I was able to, of course I had to come and check this one out first.

I love that you tied the turtle into the story. Chad is just too adorable for his own good.

I'm a little upset that Abby and Maurice got together. I wanted Abby to not appreciate how he handle thing with her sister and see him for what he truly is, which is a jerk. A big BIG jerk.

Favorite line:
How am I supposed to throw myself at him if I can’t even find him?
mr. arlington
2006-09-04 . chapter 31
Ooh, sequel! That sounds interesting. Great story. Took a little long to get it done, but still very good. If only Maurice had been run over by a bus at some point...
vampi
2006-09-04 . chapter 31
OH MY GOODNESS THATS WAS AMAZING INCREDIBLE, CONGRATULATIONS!
greensapphire
2006-09-03 . chapter 31
All I have to say about this fic is OMG this was the most AWESOME fic I've read,you have made me LOVE Cree/Chad, I admit I did LIKE them in E.N.D,but with this fic and fanart(by the way they are awesome)you made me LOVE them for life,but now I'm sad that is the end you should do the sequal like right away,and I totally agree on Cree not finding out about Maurice,so like Im gonna look forward to the sequal and one-shots,and I praise you to say your fics are as awesome as your art, till then :)
*greensapphire*
elodrie
2006-09-03 . chapter 31
Wow, amazing, dude. (XD)

Can't wait for the one-shtod :)

And turtles rock! Whoo!
ZePuKa
2006-09-02 . chapter 31
wow, it's finally over! took you long enough... ;P haha, a nice ending, though slightly a lil gushy for my tastes... gotta love that turtle tho! XD I must say the only thing throughout this story that I was displeased with was that abby and maurice ended up together... you painted him up to be a jerk throughout the whole story and now I dislike this guy enough to not wish him on anyone! XD ah well...
NebuNeferu
2006-09-01 . chapter 31
MAKE THE SEQUEL! I'll help! Just for an idea, make a sequal that Cree and Chad found out that Maurice didn't lose his memory or something, and the sector V KND know that Abby did not betray them. PLEASE >_< This is so cool!
ahhelga
2006-09-01 . chapter 31
Oh my lordy, lordy. You sure know how to make a great fic. This certainly deserves the 200+ reviews it received!

That last chapter certainly went up to my expectations of your writing skills, and more! I think it ended rather nicely. Usually, stories are cut off at a bad point, and it leaves the reader with an unfinished feeling. And while I'll miss seeing the story updates in my email, I'm glad it ended, or at least, glad with how it ended. Great job, great job!

And I really hope the sequel is going to actually take place, but no pressure. :)

thats me
ahhelga
aka Pauline
I'll Cover Angel and Collins
2006-09-01 . chapter 31
THAT WAS AWSOME! MAKE MORE STORIES!
ZePuKa
2006-08-28 . chapter 30
wow... I just decided that I've given up on trying to understand cree... XD

first she's one way, then another way...

anyways, there's the bologna again! XD hehe, gotta love comic relief...

as for that email, I've decided to just chuck it and start from scratch... hope you don't mind... dunno when I'll start writing the new one, prolly this weekend or something... XD

so yeah, I prolly spent HOW many months typing up that email, and I just deleted it... man do I feel stupid now... but I have my reasons, I promise... =)
ahhelga
2006-08-28 . chapter 30
And now it's getting really good.

Whoo.

thats me
ahhelga
aka Pauline
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