You should totally bring them back

haha...

Sephiroth giving Sora a **. Pure awesomeness.
=]

i realy really really really really really LOVE this STORY!

just one question though...
what happened to bug?

BUG! YAY!

what about bug? i liked bug *pout*

I remebered something. During the fight with Seph didn't Riku use something to slow the movements of his opponents but it take alot out of him depending on the speed of the person he is fighting?

Man, I can't believe I've finished. I had the last few chapter sitting around in my email for quite a while... I'm glad I got to finish. I really did enjoy this story, seeing as I've stuck with it for a long time. All of the interesting ideas you've introduced, the plot, the way you've portrayed the character, all wonderful. I love the way it ended, with everyone happy. I'm also glad you chose the other ending. (Sorry, but I like it better. :P) Thanks for writing, its been fun to read! Ja ne!

Oh my do I love this story! It so pretty and amazing. Yay, I'm not the only one who kinda likes Demyx and Namine. XD The discarded ending was kinda bittersweet, and I like the actual one better, but either were good. :D Um, I don't know if you've found a website to put original stores on yet, but if you haven't there is fictionpress(dot)com. It's made with the same type of layout as FFnet, but the color sceme is different. It was the same site that brought me to FFnet. :D

This is a lovely story! I hearts it! :D

you keep saying it's five teens, but there are six.

you keep saying it's five teens, but there are six.

OMG! this ending almost made me not read the story! lol, sorry, but i haven't technically finished reading yet... i just couldn't resist peeking a look at the end... and then i read this, and was all like oh's noes, they die!? i was all brokenhearted and convinced i couldn't possibly read the story if it was gonna make me cry, and then i read the AN... *relief* thank gods!

aww, yay!! i cant believe its over, though!

its been such a nice ride, and i look forward to what you do in the future.

I remember this story! It's been ages since I last read it, and now it's over. :( Still, it's a satisfying conclusion (both endings were, by the way).

You've got such amazing talent as a writer that it'll be a shame to no longer see you on Fanfiction, but hopefully I'll get to see more of your writing on then? I bet you'd be awesome at originals.

Personally, I like to use FictionPress for my originals because it's run by the same people who run FanFiction, so the layout and posting style is all the same. LiveJournal, the other site I use for writing, also has tons of communities for original work.

Anyway, it feels so strange to say goodbye to a story I started reading when I was in high school, but it's been a while coming. I hope I don't have to say goodbye to your fantastic writing however, and I hope to see you soon on other sites (FictionPress please!) with more amazing work.

Congratulations!
~Lockea

could of been better but dont worry
it was memroy making

Well, this has been a seriously awesome story. And of course I still remember it. And I have a crappy short-term memory so it's not just me. Anyways, I think you ended this very well. Especially with the whole Roxas promising Axel he'd marry him thing. Dude, that was hilariously awesome. I'm sad to see it end, but it's a good ending so I'm happy at the same time. Bittersweet huh? :) It's too bad you won't probably won't be writing anymore fanfiction, 'cause I sure enjoyed it, at least. But I hope you continue writing 'cause I think you're pretty darn good. Much better than me at least xD Anyways, it's been fun! Well, hope you have a Lovely life as well. -^-^-