OH wow an update, how cool! Wow the tension in this chapter was great! Simba's being a real jerk here, he needs to let Kovu become King and I bet Kiara can change that when he steps down but man he's really harsh with that idea. And I am happy to see that Sarabi is still alive, at least she can fix up all the tension thats going on.

Now as for Stormy, definitly do not get rid of him, he's such a great character that you have to fit him in somehow. What I was thinking, and I think you may have done this originally but I cannot remember, was that you could have Kah and Kota running toward a waterhole, Kah jumps in and lands on Stormy who was having a nice relaxing time. Stormy is very startled by this but soon warms up to his two new friends and he follows them to whereever they are going. Just thought that would be a fun idea, hopefully that can work out.

And just to let you know I do have a new story up and running if you want to check it out. I also have some drawings over at TLKFAA you might enjoy. Since I am rambling on and on I will shut up now and wait for your next chapter so keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

Yay an update! And yay Kota! And yay Kahllynn! And yay random other things! Any way nice chapter, I like the idea of the Majini pride though they sound very stuck up, which of course was probably your intention. But poor Kota, he needs more love. Well I hope you can update soon. Keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

Ah another lovely chapter! I love the description of how Kah goes after the cub even though it does end sadly, its well done and I can see it happening in my mind. I would probably never be able to write like that. And Kota, Yayness!

Well I hope you update again soon, don't take too long, maybe two months or so because I want to keep reading. So keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

Why hello there, I didn't realize you had updated until I was looking around for something to read before going to bed.

Wow I guess the wait was worth it, your descriptions are so well done with how you describe their colors and everything. And I loved that little talk with Simba in the end, very powerful. Great job I'm gonna read the next chapter.

Ah another well written chapter, I love your take on Vitani here, tough from the beginning. And I also like your story on Nuka poor cub, life ruined because Zira can't take being ordered. Well keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

OH MY GOSH! I LOVE this chapter! It was dark and twisted and I love it! *laughs evilly* Vitani is liking her newly adopted brother already, I suppose that's good. Again, another excellent chapter! Update soon!

You suck...up words like a vaccum. XP Yeah that was dumb and I don't think it made any sense. any way Still wonderful as ever, I liked how you added the last part in, I don't remember it being there the last time, poor cubs having to live with that awful Zira.
And I am guessing you are talking about Stormy in your Authors note above, I like him because he has cool colors and I like how he is a water lion, makes him different an unique. Plus he has a kind heart. Well I hope to see more soon. Keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

Again, a good chapter! Zira despises weakness... Killing an innocent cub is just plain cruel, but that's how Zira is. Now that Nala is gone, that means Simba should make his 'rightful' appearance soon, but that'll mean trouble.

Just so you know, I don't critique, it's too messy and I won't tell you that you suck, because that's rude and inappropriate. Every author has their way of writing and I like yours. Update this story soon!

- Minister aka Mary Wilcox

I wanted to review this last night but fanfiction was being wierd and wouldn't let me, so sorry it took me so long. Any way I thought your story was perfect the way it was, so beautiful and well done but I guess if you want to revise it go right ahead. It is still a beautiful story and I did notice a few changes that made it sound even better. :D I hope to see more updates from this yet again so keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

P.S. I did update last week, wasn't sure if you knew so I thought I would give you the message.

I read the original story, chapter 1 that is, and I compared it: I like this rewrite alot. So Mitavo and Ahliah's new son will have a great destiny? Well, now that Zira has shown up and Mitavo has been struck by an unknown lion, I feel that fate has other plans. Hmm, Nala giving birth to Kovu? Kinda odd, but that's okay. I myself always wondered whether she gave birth to either Kovu or Vitani. Good insight my friend. I look forward to upcoming chapters!

PS: If you have a chance, I have a story on this section called 'Grudges and Prices' I think you'll like it!


- Greetings to you from Minister aka Mary Wilcox

Freaking amazing!

Awesomeness I love your style of writting :)
btw it's _caitlin_ 4rm tlkfaa ^_^

I cried.

wo omg omg omg!I finally finished it and it's absolutley excellent!wow!now onto the second one lol XD

Hello Kah! This is Edward_Elric. I finally finished this story. I started it along time ago, and took my lunch hour (more like 45 minutes) to read a little bit fo your story at a time. It was masterfully written, you really do write like a pro. I love the fantacy in it, the angels and gods, etc. it was very creative. You used many powerful words and descriptions, which made everything just seem so powerful. I was sad for Kovu though that Simba decided after all not to give him his lands, and i felt sorry for kiara too. But am glad that vitani got to rule, thats pretty cool! Well I wanted to say a lot more, but I can't remember any of it. Haha. I hope that sometime you'll check out my story, I cant remmeber if you said you've read it before or not. But if not, i would love to see a review from ya. ^^