I'm actaully very amazed and intrigued with this.

CLaire? M. I tohught Mags, but knows I;m so intrigued.

You've done this so well, the style f writing flows os well, and suits this story. Many a person tires this fornt of writing, and many a perosn fials, but you... more?

You can tell that it's Hawkeye from 'He's a love'em and leave'em kind of guy', I would say that the other person is Margaret.

yes, what do those eyes portray?

aw, poor new doctor.

no, I just think his ego is bruised!

aw, poor Hawkeye!

I think he is Hawkeye and she is Margaret.

Ooh I like it! You do a very good job using the poems to tell the story. You're the first I've seen to pull it off. I really like the story, please continue it!

oo, i like this, even as a stand alone without the rest it's freaking awsome, really gets youto think, the last few lines maginifique!

another great part, i'm so digging this fic, hehe, can't wait to see what the story yields...

o.. intregue... sweet.. keep up the good work on this, such an orignal idea!

i think he heard ;)

this is a really nifty idea, keep it up, i put this on my alert list hehe

this one has more of a story type feel to it then the first, but i still like it...
i think the first one could have been a stand alone, but i'm glad you decided to continue it, great work...

i only kind of know the mash characters, and can never remember their names, but i think i see the faces of the two this is written about, this is really nifty!