Great fic! Is Ran okay? Update soon please!

Yay! Great story! I love these kinds! Please write more asap!*hehehe*

Great story so far! Please update soon! :)

narsaksas

HOLY DUDE! Please continue this soon! You've got me sitting on the edge of my seat. Whoa good story... you've got me hooked

I really love your story. it's very well written, and I think you've done a good job keeping to the character personalities. I can't wait to read more! please update!

-Gabri

That was really good

but please make sure that you're keeping track of the storyboard and remember not to lose their characteristics Very Important just a little mistake can get tons of ppl flaming you you noe.

About the story board, I think that the stuff the BO was dealing with another guy were actually photograph bases (U noe those used a decade ago, where).

One question I need to ask you. Was the play that you were talking about the one where Shinichi and Ran hugged, or was it the one in the Silver Magician Sky movie?

please write more

Whoa... Ran's taken. Shinichi (Conan) had to go save her.

Now I wonder what's his other secret. Hmm...

Well I like it, keep it going. _ updated soon!

Dude. You have to continue. Seriously. (Though it's been, what? Almost a year since last update? I can at least try. ;) The characters are great! And I never thought Shinichi telling Ran his secret could be pulled off in a non-sappy wayk, but you managed I'll just leave you on watch and see if you ever show again. ;D

Ah, found a typo. Gin's 'Mentaitai' should actually be 'Meitantei' (名探偵) (

hey, this ones pretty good, update it!

Come on, don't stop. Your story is really interesting.

Hey this is really good so far! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

*Chuckles* yes PAMS is a good thing. It means please add more soon. Great chappie PAMS

Very kewl.Nver thought they would stay around and R an would be shot.Well,tyl!UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

aww, that's really, really good! very well written, lov it, and update soon okay? *_