I was getting nervous there at the end. It sure took Gris long enough to convince her to stay. That Sara sure can be stubborn. Anyway, good story. Thanks for giving it a happy ending!

I do have to say very well written. A few spelling and grammar mistakes but very well written.

I had pepperoni pizza and Crystal Light for dinner last night! Oh and the story...it started out good...but how will it end? I shall read on to see.

omg! if that was a choice for them to get together on the show, like grissom said, i wouldn't have it any other way. i loved it so much i almost screamed with joy. peace. keep up the fantastic work.

Wow! This story was great!

omg! that was so totally awesome! i wouldn't want that story any other way. i loved the part about them getting so mad that they would just kiss, i knew that would happen. loved the story cant wait to read more. peace!11

Very, very good!
I loved this fic!! very very angst!
The end was perfect!
Congrats

OMG that is the best GSR i have read. Your such a great author! Even with a little spelling errors. Believe me i have em too. Just one thing that bugged me. you spell coarse i think you mean: course. Thats the only thing that bugged me. Dont mean to harp. But i love your work!

GREAT STORY! GREAT JOB! IT WAS REALLY DESCRIPTIVE AND MOVING.

Thank you for writing a happy end. Today I'm in a better mood. My gransmother's healthy again...
Great story...
-carrie-

It was a really, really good story, BUT YOU KILLED HER IN THE END! THATS NOT FAIR!

Micely written. I can't wait until the final? chapter.

Ha ha ha. Hi again. My turn to bug you! This freaking rocks! Love it. I'll write more of mine, promise. You'll have it by next week. See ya tomorrow!

OMG, I know I've said it before but I'll say it again, I LOVE this story. I love how detailed and emotional it all was,omg, you have to update soon.
P.S. Spelling errors mean nothing when your reading a story that's this good.

Me likey!! Take your time with the next chapter because we want it to be good too ;)

~CLW