i loved it

i found this fic very touching. you portrayed koyo toya as I've always thought he would be like, only that I've never managed to express how I imagined him in my wrtiting. very good job!

A nice little drabble. Not much plot, but I don't think that's the point. On occasion I enjoy analysis of the characters. Touya Kouyo is one such character, and you did a wonderful job with him. The language is beautiful, and the ending was sentimental without being too sappy. I have been disappointed lately with the recent fics that painted him the way you said he wasn't. Very interesting.

Hope to see more drabbles from you!