aw so cute! bromance!! does falco die?! does he?! noo falco don't die! he's my favorite ever!! so sad! ohh the angst. fabulous writing style and vocabulary and overall awesomeness. *applaudes*

-gives giant cookie-

You write so well... This really works well with The Behemoth.

You should be proud of such achievements. Really.

Keep up the excellent work.

Wow I really liked hoe you brought out everones emotions and thoughts and feelings towardd each other. Write more please.

This is brilliant. Its wonderful how you diplayed each characters personal thoughts and emotions, like opening a persons heart. I got a bit confused at first, after the first chapter, then realised what you were writing about. Amazing writing style! I cant wait for another one! ^^