Very cute. The humour seemed pretty well done to me, the babbly nature actually added some charm.

Haha, so adorable and hilarious:) When in doubt, act oblivious. Great quote.

x3

that was so cute!

Yay! Shojo sparkles! This made me me giddy!

haha i like this story. its soo cute! a nice lil fic. would be sweet if u made a sequel *hint hint*. krayon's character was totally funny. nice job! -

Hillarious!

Oh dear...*laughing hysterically* Wonderful job! Hehe...oh, crap, I've gotta go to school!

Hahaha...funny that Krayon set such childish traps instead of being straightforward. What ever happen to the powerfu demon lord? Yeah, I enjoyed reading it tho, so childish.

AH, beautiful, it deserves to be continued! So typical of Erutis to wave away her words like that, lol. Noble pout indeed, he'd so look smashing on one. P "When in doubt, act oblivious." Heh, that's excellent! _

:P funneh funneh add more soon

Lol, that was funny! -Snickers- Krayon is so funny! AND he IS insane! Will you write more?

lmaf haliriouse! .

That was so cute! I was laughing the whole time. ** Keep up the good work!

*cracks up* Absolutely...hilarious..._

That was HILARIOUS! I don't know if anyone else finds it as funny as I do, but oh, poor Erutis! *pounds fists weakly on floor* Great work OtakuSailorV, once again you have triumphed!