WOW! Painful much?

Uh, yeah, okay, um I've already read this once, but I'm writing my own fanfiction about Torn, and I was wondering, would you have a problem if I used your story for reference material? I won't copy, I promise, and I'll give credit to your work, I was just wondering if it'd be alright with you. If you don't want me to that's fine, though they may turn out similar anyway, I mean, how many ways can you write about getting tattoos? (For me this will be one chapter of a much longer story.)

This was a really great piece of work, I think that you really have the potential to be agreat author.

GreyJedi

*chuckles* My sympathies, Torn. I wonder if spray-on novacain works on your face... *ponders*

Yeck, I am still resolved to get a tattoo one of these days... just not on my face or ears, thank you. Great little ficlet, by the way. *looks at Torn's face* Ouch, man. Ouch.

your a really good writer i loved your story._

HAHAHAHA! LOL! That was funny as hell! Except, hell isn't funny... then it was funny as... something really funny! Torn should NOT have joined the gaurd if that's what happens to them... HAHAHA!

Love this. Brilliantly written little backstory! Keep it up!

lol, i enjoyed this! Yeah, i think won't get a tatoo either...lol

Great job! You're story really tells what it's like to get a tattoo (I would know, I have three of them.). I got my third one done a week ago and it hurt like hell. But from the sound of it, Torn definately got it worse. Hope to see more one-shots like this!

ME 2! U displayed torn's awesome ink well. I present u with a digital chocolate chip :D

Cool, you described it in such detail, my english teacher always tells me I lack detail which is why I prefer to right poems, is this the 10 story on fanfiction? I wish it was me, I wanted that privilige! Only I had no ideas in my head for fanfiction on Jak and Daxter. I might not feel like killing you right now if you read and review my story What happens When you mess with Laxtives I know I spellt laxatives wrong but that is how I spelt it on the title and also reading and reviewing my poems would be good to

Whew! I've readed many versions of this episode in Torn's life, but this one was the best so far. It felt REAL!

I liked this. Great descriptions. Hehe, I don't think I'll ever get a tattoo now... _

Hey, this is really great! - I never really thought much of Torn getting his tatts until I tried writing about it, but I really love how you've written this.

A few missing full stops in places after the speech, but it always happens with uploading, so I wouldn't worry.

Keep it up!

Good story, I really felt like I was there by myself... shiver at the thought. Anyway, good story as said!.