Very sweet & beautiful story!

God...this read like poetry. Beautiful and so sudden.

perhaps something like this really happened and explain the new G&S relationship at the moment, I loced it thank you:)

This is such a good book. I love it.

You wrote this wonderful thing while sitting on that bus? I must have slept longer than I thought. Between Pirates and House, I don't know how you made the time. I love it. I am just sorry to took me so long to find it.

Awsome story! I can't wait for you to continue, if you don't... I will come after you... LOL. Keep up the outstanding work!

AAH! That was amazing! I loved everything, but I especially liked the imagery you used in describing NYC. You are definitely one of my favorite authors. And you wrote this while traveling? Hmm... maybe this weekend's flight from JFK to Orlando will get my creative juices flowing... Wishful thinking! Keep on writing!

Great fic. I liked it a lot.
~Jackie~

LOVE IT!

I absolutely ADORE your story. It's so sweet and romantic and makes me go aw the whole way through. Please say there's gonna be more. Please please please.

Clearly inspired by your recent trip. Lovely!

sheila

Nice job. I really like the rhythm of this piece, it seems to match the rhythm of New York or love or...something. Very sweet.

I love hearing where an author finds inspiration. What a great result. Beautifully written. Thanks for this little bit of fun. We need your snippets to get us through the summer. Go write another. :D (P.S. The airport name is spelled McCarran, not that anyone cares at ALL.)

what a great story! I love it! the character building and the descriptions of what they see and feel- it's like i can see the movie in my head! great job!

great job! i like the play on "the city that never sleeps"